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Incredible
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For my girl (a departure from the war of the Eds thing)


Incredible it seems
a mold hewn from a dream
Cast in bronze I look beyond
to you...

What would I do

I've wondered if
its all just what it seems
and not without a doubt I rose
in a primal scream

I love you
Yeah, I luv ya

You're the only one
I've dreamed of
you're the only one who's real
and I want to be your everything
You're the only one I feel

You tell me that you love me
well, you know I love you too
We've been through it all
and there's nothing I wouldn't do...

to kiss, to touch, to taste you
to inhale all you are
to open up and share
each of our battle-scars

And there's nothing I want more
than to be the man you love

'cause baby its just you I'm thinking of
 
   


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 Reviews of "Incredible"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
A very endearing, loving piece so full of promise for the future....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
nice lady j

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
I guess Chants you must do what you must do for queen and country..lol

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
BEautiful tribute and confirmation of love to the person who shares your soul.

Hugs'
Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Love is all, Edwin! You express this most effectively here. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you both with love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Wow, for once I'm at a loss for words and we both know that this doesn't happen often. You really know how to touch a gal's heart. You've not only touched mine, you've captured it. It rests securely in its place... right there, inside yours. I love you so very much!!!
Snuggs xxx

PS: You may be a Viking warrior or a Roman conqueror to the world but to me you'll always be my Cuddles.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Most Passionate, Viking Ed!

The Battle of the Eds is on Holiday today. I posted a commercial instead, while we re-group!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
You da man! Incredible is a good word for what this poem is Edwin! Chanti has gotta love it! You are both blessed to have found each other! I love the romance surrounding you both, it should be a film.All they show today is violence, I'm dying to see a nice romantic movie. Make one Edwin;-)

ET

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
An honest disclosure of how a man feels, the depths of a man's heart in an Incredible poem written for the woman who changed him: I give this verse to you Edwin and Chanti - it defines you both to each other; Da amantem et sentit quod dico - translates, "only another lover, with love like mine, can understand." Love appears in all literature, so why not here - watch this space...Love to you both, Edwin. This is not a passing episode - I would like you to remember this...

Warmly,
Sage


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