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Rain, God's Housekeeper
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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In reply to Donna's challenge


three minutes long

going strong

 but i will not take long

 

she talks o f rain

cojoined with pain

as if it is sane

 

I see rain as clean

soothing the mean

gentling the green

 

it helps me sleep

won't let me weep

keeps the beat

 

washes our souls

clears our goals

flower unfolds

 

Rain is God's housekeepers

like man's to beekeepers

or the tired street sweepers.
 

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 Reviews of "Rain, God's Housekeeper"
Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Oh, yes rain does cleanse the earth, and gives a drink to the thirsty plants to make them grow, and cleans them for our eyes to see their beauty. The sound of a gentle rain is so relaxing and refreshing. Very good reading. Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
you have marvelously refreshed us with your imagery ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
I love rain. Well done, Felix. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Nicely done !

Reviewed on January 15, 2005
rain truly does clean the earth; the earth always smells so much better after a good, soaking rain or storm! very nice!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Well now I agree with Sherry in that it is cleansing. However we got a lot of cleansing here lately. But rain is good cause I remember the drought in 2002.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
When people complain about or blame the rain for making them sad or dreary, I feel it is time for them to look deeper into their souls and address the real reasons for their sadness. The rain is very cleansing, I agree, Felix. I love to walk in it and let it wash away all my worries and cares. A very nice poem to meet the challenge.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
I've bin out of action, so don't know the conditions of this challenge - but I do know that this is an absolutely ace write and quite a unique form and perspective. So much said and so much ground covered with so few syllables and lines. Has a correspondingly "clean" feel to it, too, and I like all the space around the words. Excellent, Felix: challenges me, for sure! LOL Kate xx


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