The Funeral Shroud of Atlantic Fog (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

You take me there and beyond......this is divine work Felix!

Ty, Dani

Btw, I like your bio pic too ;)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

the imagery and mood of this poem is outstanding ... i could visualize this scene quite easily having experienced it many times our at Montauk and Block Island ... again, the visuals are exceptionally clear and entire atmosphere of the poem is gripping ...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Brillant colors here!!!the imagery is outstanding
could feel the chill and here the waves
like your bio pic as well,
enjoy these kinds of writes!!!!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Dear Felix,
Spectacular poetry dear friend. You are so gifted and I marvel at your ability to build vivid images with original expression. This is awe inspiring.
Chanti

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Gorgeous images and an eerie story are protrayed through your verses, Felix. This is an excellent write, I could feel the heaving of a ship beneath my feet as I waited patiently for the fog to lift and guide my safely to land. I could smell the salt and feel the damp chill...you really did a great job! This is a write that the reader can really taste.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Great job of portraying fog and all it elicits depending on one's mood. I don't see fog of the sea but the river below me gets swallowed by fog quite often. Thanks for this, Felix. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Felix, Felix, Felix, the title grabbed around the neck! THE FUNERAL SHROUD OF ATLANTIC FOG is really a beautiful poem full of atmosphere! The fog does make an eerie environment, but it is your style of word weave that gives THE FUNERAL SHROUD OF ATLANTIC FOG the atmosphere it has.

Fog has that ability to muffle and distort sound and scene. We have fog, very thick, dangerous fog often (I live on the Gulf coast of Florida) during the winters. I like playing in the fog, especially on a bright, full moon night. Try it sometime. Golf courses usually have wonderful THICK patches of fog and plenty of space to run around and laugh.

I truly relished THE FUNERAL SHROUD OF ATLANTIC FOG.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

it sounds eerie and lovely to me, that is one of the areas i have never seen and always wanted to

Reviewed by Lilja . (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Great Poem

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Felix, I gotta say I really love this one, I am putting this in my library for future reference...I have stood on a deck of a small boat off the NJ coast when just such a fog blew in, may not have the northern winds with it, but those Atlantic fogs can be the worst...Ed

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Felix--the visuals here are fantastic. I love this piece.
Thank you for your constant support of my work. We are kindred spirits my dear man.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I agree you just get a very uncomfortable feeling about fog and it is so mysterious.

Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Not only the Atlantic Fog. It is like that anytime there is fog. This is a very good description of what it is like to be closed in by fog, the eerie sounds and no vision. H.B. to you. Karen