Sometimes we see a member of the opposite sex that stirs hidden desires...this is dedicated to one such lady
The Enchantress
Her eyes mesmerize and tantalize
and promise passion only dreamt
I want to possess, her drink her in
hold her close to me in dreams
Share earth shattering orgasms and
create ear splitting screams
Her lips promise
the taste of forbidden pleasure
I crave to run my fingers over
her velvet skin
to feel her breasts budding
as I caress them lovingly
while gasping for breath lustily
Her taste and her body I sample
like a connoisseur of flesh
I inhale the natural musk of her scent
overshadowed by subtly perfume
Feel her hips moving, thrusting
achingly beneath mine
Desire so potent it burns
past the lines of time
Her name rolls off my lips
a secret lover in my dreams
A friend who will never know
my true desire for her
Only in the realms of fantasy
will I possess her
Only there can I make love to her
and love her evermore
Dear Felix,
It was incredibly brave for you to openly confess your erotic fantasy about a friend - something not many of us would be able to do. You've written a steamy yet sensual poem that is at once filled with lust and with love. Only a great poet with heart could write like this about a dream and make it come to life as you have.
Chanti
A very sensuous and passionate write, plus a powerful imagination that can stir such intense desires. Fantasies are the beauties that stimulate us :) Exceptionally well written Felix.
"Desire so potent it burns past the lines of time..." This line really hits home, Felix. Well done. Perhaps the fantasy is better than reality??? Best, Carolyn
Wow Felix! Whomever your fantasy lover is...she's a lucky woman! Keep dreamin' my friend..for dreams are what keeps us alive and looking forward to our next journey.
Wonderfully penned and exciting!
Lisa
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2005
Yep. I have to agree with Dave on this one. Good write.
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It was incredibly brave for you to openly confess your erotic fantasy about a friend - something not many of us would be able to do. You've written a steamy yet sensual poem that is at once filled with lust and with love. Only a great poet with heart could write like this about a dream and make it come to life as you have.
Chanti
A very sensuous and passionate write, plus a powerful imagination that can stir such intense desires. Fantasies are the beauties that stimulate us :) Exceptionally well written Felix.
warm hugs
Elga
This is most sensual and inviting, ( sizzles) Good one Felix.
;) Ch'erie
Wonderfully penned and exciting!
Lisa
fantastic poem!
Seriously Felix, very gentle and erotic write. Whew! Loved it.
Excellent write..one of your best
~Linda
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)