God's Design (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Warm poetry that lightens the heart.
It feels like the country Colorado.
Where was this written?
Yes, we all want to go there.

Blessings,

JMD

Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2005

It is always good to get away from the real world and just do what you want to do. We tend to live too fast and let the beauty bypass us. Even just taking a walk in the woods or pasture and breathing in the fresh smell of nature, or picking wild flowers and enjoying their smell. That is what I call getting back to nature. You wrote it like I feel about it. Karen

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

This is what my spirit needs, Felix. A deep commune with nature. You captured spiritual solitude beautifully ! I yearn!

~ Mari

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

This is beautiful... both the poem and the image... total solutitude = serenity... at one with the world = peace

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

This is very beautiful poem, Felix
well done,
love and peace

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Be real, Felix. Love this write. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

This is a great poem, Felix and I love the way that you handled the rhyme. There is something cleansing and spiritual about being out in nature. I hope you have a wonderful time and return refreshed with poems to delight us all.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Felix,
You know as well as I that cabin holds more than loneliness for you. It's your safe haven from not only life, but all things within and without.
It's rustic walls maintains your livelihood and replenishes your soul the nourishment it needs to continue your climb.
The ladder is steep, and wrungs are slippery, but you know you'll manage the journey.
See you when you return, I'm looking forward to your next write.
Take care.

Lisa

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Great write Felix...enjoy yourself and renew...see ya when you get back.

Allen

Reviewed by Lori Maynard

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

This was very peaceful and sing-song-like. I particularly like the next to last stanza. What I wouldn't give to enjoy such solitude for even half a day!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

This is great Felix. I like the chirping of crickets lulling me to sleep; the distant howl of the wolf, baying out the lonliness; I love just lying back on the ground and looking up at the stars, and the moon. I love walking through the wild flowers, touching their soft petals as I go. Felix, remember, solitude is not a forlorn quest, but a break away from the realities of this stupid world. Go on Felix, throw in that line, and if you catch two trout, have one for me too. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"if I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Can I join you?

You can play the guitar and we can sing with the crickets...deal?

Okay just a thought...when you hear that noisy beetle know it's me mocking you....lol!!

And when you look that trout in the eye....look closely for a wink...that will be me too!!

Okay???????

Enjoy your isolation trip Felix...I envy you right now....I need that cabin methinks!!

Love Tinka

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

That sounds fab. Only ever seen such things in films.
Have a good lamenting time...
Don't open the door to mad axemen...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

have a inspired break back to the basics ... don't forget to bring a flashlight ;)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

You take care and we all have to do this from time to time. Me I just sing and enjoy my dogs.