The Virgin's Honeymoon Night (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Intense romantic sexuality. Beautifully written

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Feli, Felix! A masterpiece of tender romance. The realism and love is so deeply felt. An elegant tale of first love!
EXCELLENT!!

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Felix, how like you to meld lush sensuality and grace into such a luxuriously explosive piece!

~ Mari

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

How incredibly tender and romantic...I love it! Michelle

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Dear Felix,
You've written this sensual, loving poem with such sensitivity. It captures so exquisitely the act of virginal love-making as it is meant to be. It has both a tenderness and almost reverent feel to it. *sigh*
Only one suggestion I can make and that is to change the line, "We ease like fragile china figures to satin sheets in turned down bed" to read, "They ease like....etc." This will keep the perspective right. You've written about 'she' and 'he' and then switched to 'we'. This might have been deliberate. I wonder if you were writing as an observer and then at some point identified and that was the result - a personal memory incorporated. Hope you don't mind my suggestion.
Chanti

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

The crowning glory of love so perfectly captured.
What a poem!
John

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Oh so wonderful a poem. It expresses the desires and beauty of the wedding night perfectly. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Felix, I found myself actually trying to be quiet, as I read, so that I wouldn't disturb the air.
A beautiful and precious write.

Lisa

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Yes Brother of mine, this IS very tender, sweet, loving, romantic, and dreamy too. This is great Felix, I love every word. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

a very softheated beautiful poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Very tender write. Loved this.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

What a beautiful capture of that most special moment, Felix. I could feel the anticipation and that little bit of fear as they offer themselves completely to one another for the very first time. The hope is that this moment will live on forever and that it will so strengthen their bond that their relationship will stand the test of time.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Very beautiful
well done

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Well you certainly captured this one Felix.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Beautiful vivid remembrance of a beautiful moment in time!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

WELCOME HOME, Felix... wot you been burnin up there in that stove of yours?! You've come in from the cold with a vengeance here and paint the most tender and loving portrait of how the "first time" should be for all who truly wait to gift their all-in-all to another. You build the reader's anticipation alongside that of the virgin's and certainly evoke some powerful memories and feelings. A wonderful bedrock for a relationship to be built on... particularly if things just keep getting better and better! :)) Loving and sincere... but the book reading is a fascination!!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

Felix,

Made me feel like he was an older, experienced lover by the *pretending to read*. A beautiful write.

Cynthia

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 4, 2005

so tender and loving Felix............
This is a treasured moment........that has a life of its own....

all moments should have such power......and be deserving of a beautiful write like this one..........anita :)