broken fragments of my heart (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 10, 2005

Wow- what a Poem-- alot shared here.. Good job and SAD :( What doesn't break us, makes us STrOnger! :) Great wRite Felix,very good.. HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on May 1, 2005

Oh Felix I've been there and can relate to the pain. There are times when I can tangibly feel the pain that you so well expressed here. As karen said, pain moulds us. I have no regrets but that I might have hurt others. That will always get to me.
Beautifully captured as always. You have such a precious heart.
Chanti

Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2005

Pains of our past make us what we are today. You have shared yours with us in a way that not many people can do. Very good. Karen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Blimey, I can taste the blood of this, Felix... I am so sorry for your pain. But perhaps each revisitation is like a healing flood to release and work through the issues, like a succession of waves, and with each memory is the "washing away" of that which has poisoned the system, until, like holding that bleeding heart under a running tap, the water turns eventually from blood-red to clear... I believe that this must be the case, hard as it is to keep facing the pain time after time... but there will be a point when so much has been washed away that it has no power to hurt you anymore. Truly. Wish I could hug you... I feel this. LOL, Boppa, here's a bit more salt from my eyes to help staunch the flow... Kate xx

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Dear Felix, this is beautiful in its sadness. Those splinters hurt all the more as the more the crystal shattered was pure and rare...
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Excellent hearfelt and painful write this one (Capt'n Boppa)...superb imagery.

(1st mate) Paul;-]

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Felix, this is so good. The heart writes with such flair and emotion. This is excellent.

Allen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

very painful and moving poem ... you catuptued the emotion well ...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

A very sad write Felix and one can feel the pain in it.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Felix,

*Tears* the best tribute I can give--can hardly see for them flowing down my cheeks--well done

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Josie Lilly (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

This is heartbreaking. Just heartbreaking.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Very fine, Felix. An honest, poignant write. I let the hurt from a past relationship haunt me until I no longer needed the pain. And I let go. But it took years to be able to do that. I remember the joy and bless the relationship for the love that was given...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

so sad, felix; but still, a very good write! well done! :(

Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Being dumped stinks!
The heart never forgets that feeling...

Jennifer:)

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

oh boy have i ever been there! i remember it well, as you obviously do too

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Sounds like and broken relationship....I guess I know the feeling!!

Not easy to let go!!

Love Tinka