The warm scent of a barn loft….hay moist and seasoned, warm milk scent from freshly milked cows, a barn cat meowing for the leftovers, a young girls breath against my neck as my hands explored unknown places
The smell of cow patties…ripe but not altogether unpleasant either in the morning sun, the smell of the heather and the strawberries growing along the cow path, the smell of my own sweat as we walk hand in hand driving the cows to pasture
The smell of home brew…heady and warm, of old leather Buick car seats, of your momma’s toilet water on your neck, the smell of ivory soap in your hair as we dance to a country song
Kerosene lantern fumes…smoky, musky just barely holding back the night, in the shadows I taste your lips, smell the scent of the Pepsi you’d been sipping and I smell your need as strong and wild as the animals we’d watched rutting in the field just that day
Scents and odours so long forgotten yet still so close to the surface of my memory. So strong after all these years. I can still smell theses things as if I was once again a lad of sixteen. Once again that city boy transplanted to farm country. Smells, tastes, sounds and feelings, Heaven was a country farm and a country girl that I never ever did forget.
You can take the person out of the country but you can't take the country out of the person. And you've verified it.
You have such a wonderful way with words. I don't know too many that could have woven cow patties and romance together, and in the end found such exquisite poetry...Nobody but you, Felix...nobody but you! And that is definetly meant to be a compliment!
I so enjoyed this!
Lisa
Having not been raised in the country-country (suburbia, for me), the imagery you invoked in your words stimulated each sense with delight! Now I see what I've been missing--an excellent write, Poet and friend! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(And Denise, even though I'm not country, I still remember K orange soda and hay rides. :) And the thing I miss most? Not having to worry about who your neighbor was and not locking the car or house up at night. :( I really miss those.
Paul;-}
Loved it, and whenever I smell pine tree's I think of the old farm, or I see Jersey cows...
Lovely Felix
TY Ch'erie
Dunno bout the boy though
A wonderful much enjoyable write.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)