This, Felix, is a feast for the eyes, as well as the heart.
The way you've cascaded each verse is just right for the theme... repetition can be very tricky and each "can you" added new melancholy... beautifully done.
To choose a subject poets are so familiar with and give it your own soul to express it makes it unique. Its simplicity is profound. Wonderful writing, visually and emotionally. katy xox.
This isn't your normally upbeat, beautiful romantic poem...I hope you're okay. This one beats with a sadness that is definately felt.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2005
Down on the farm they say you can fix everything with duct tape and baling wire. But to mend a broken heart it takes a lot of love and patience. Beautifully written and but so sad. Karen
WHISPERS OF THE HEART is artist and author J. Allen Wilson's second book of poetry.It can be autographed and shipped within 48 hours of order. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
The way you've cascaded each verse is just right for the theme... repetition can be very tricky and each "can you" added new melancholy... beautifully done.
To choose a subject poets are so familiar with and give it your own soul to express it makes it unique. Its simplicity is profound. Wonderful writing, visually and emotionally. katy xox.
Janny xoxoxo
This isn't your normally upbeat, beautiful romantic poem...I hope you're okay. This one beats with a sadness that is definately felt.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
That's how I feel and see it!!
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Can I? maybe with duct tape, ha ha or perhaps a good laugh.
Thanks