The End of Forever (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Stark sadness expressed, Felix. May the light shine through and chase away all dark thoughts. Thank you. Live in love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

SO sad. Why it feels so familiar? Beautiful job!!
Peace and Love, Phyllis <3

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Today is Stanley Kunitz's 100th birthday (see my blog), Pulitzer Prize winning poet who writes how he must keep changing, even now, at the threshold of his second century. We are never too old to change, too far gone to embrace new hope.

I enjoyed this, Felix.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Superbly expressed boppa, old son, I'm so glad this is pure fantasy, the really sad thing about this is that it is probably someones reality.

nice one my friend.
Paul;-)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Felix,

This one is so, so sad--the reader is immersed in every painful word. Very well done, and I hope you're okay....

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Aweeeeee Felix.. YOu wrote this Tragedy so well~! SAD and raw to the bone painful to see and read, because many -Give Up- and sometimes, the answer could have been found. Sometimes the following week, but they will never know. Theirs a lesson to be learned in all we do and say, but these thoughts of ending 1's life, I cannot condone in anyway! I pray for their spirit - lost soul as that person was- I pray that peace will find and stay within- cuz, spirits live on and on, and on. Some do not beleive that, and that's ok with me- but, I feel it too Important to say goodbye to all of lifes histories and mysteries~! This is written out so well -F- Ease your heart ! my friend, you got it out- time to mend!!!! ~Plant a seed and watch it Growww~ and it will too... Have a Great night Felix..OH, and Thank you 4 the kind and EXcitable reviews lately!!! My heart thanks you too... WARm HuGs2U-Lady,Sheee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Well expressed Felix...deep reality of far too many!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Felix,
That's the best part about writing through imagination, one second we can be flying high without limitations, and the next we can be grounded forever.
There is no stopping us!
Wonderfully penned Felix.

Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Sadly, I guess that some feel that suicide is the only way out of a relationship that can be ended no other way. But it can never be the answer - certainly not for those who remain. It really heartbreaks me to think that communication between two people who were once so close could be THIS bad and THIS unresolveable. This, although fantasy, is not the fiction for some, and my heart weeps along with your own compassion for those who daily live this hellish scenario. May they find strength and grace to cope - AND to find an alternative resolution. Bless you, Pops. Your wellspring of empathy and sympathy never dries up but ever flows to embrace and articulate the pain of others. TY for this. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

a painfuly effective poem on the aftermath of a suicidal event ...

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Dear Felix,

Fantasy is born from within our minds !! I am glad you said it is NOT about you, yet the poem is so real, and I agree with Marilyn, that so many lives are just like this, and too many too end this way. You write so well, about the realities of life. A most poignant write Felix.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Sad but true....nicely expressed:)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Glad it's not you! Such a shame so many lives are just like this. Well written