Sounds like a #1 hit FEe- I love the rhthyme all the waY throughhhhhhhhh- Awesome poem in lyrical mode- Blew me awayyyyyyyyyyyy- Keep enjoying what touches your SOUL~! WArmly and Sweetly,Sheeeoxo

I feel a heart breaking here. I hope it's not yours. You're never to old to feel love and the loss of it. You're never too old to live. This was wonderfully emotive, thanks for sharing.
Monette

A deeply moving and beautiful poem Felix

Paul;-)

oooh this is so fitting in so many ways

well done!

It seems as though the heartbroken always want to allow the heartbreaker to come to the same end.
As the old song says: "I Wish You Love."

H e a r t b r e a k i n g. 'Done' TOO good, my friend.

"Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved" sounds trite. . .?maddening?. . .in the wake of such a breakup. But. . .it is t r u e.

Peace and Love,

Alayz Theromantik [aka...hmmm, lemme see...OH. 'Pea' :)

Awwwww...... and here's me thinking my Making Music had inspired you! What a sad delusional I am! At least... hope it hasn't in that case... ??????!!!! JUS KIDDIN! You realise I am gonna be totally IMPOSSIBLE when all my studies end in a couple of weeks' time?! Keep strong, Pops... bet you're good at the Leonard Cohen stuff... 'cept you probably don't share his angst-ridden physique. Big Bears like you can't POSSIBLY be sad for toooo long. Go find a honey-pot and tickle your little girls! :)) Just stokin the fire here, Felix. This is a real campfire write, too... can feel it. Bless you, Kate xx

an exceptionally beautiful and deep poem, Felix ...

oooooooooooh Felix, You kicked poetic ass with one!
Great one .....the words dance in splendidly in intense depth and
ending in a Got-Cha!'
peace and great work Felix!!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

I see a face…I know her name
She has no soul…has no shame
Someday her song…like mine will die
All alone…she too will cry.

Emotive deep cutting words Felix!!

Hope everything is A-okay!!

Love Tinka

This is excellent, love it, one of the best I have read today. It's so soft and almost like a lullaby.

Excellent lines for a song, Felix!
Take care,
Sherry

I see a face…I know her name



She has no soul…has no shame



Someday her song…like mine will die



All alone…she too will cry....


Great lines dear Felix!
Thank you for sharing your talent!