Veil of Tears
looking through my veil of tears
age catching up… too many years
love is for the young at heart
no one hears these old mans tears
wondering when the passion died
wondering when the romance sighed
did I somehow miss its parting words
was that the time alone I sat and cried
my candles burning low and slow
from this earth I will soon must go
let go the lines that strangle me
when I am gone its then you will know
sleep now my love the night is almost past
this dream of ours just could not last
too may twist and turns in love
when Cupids arrows first are cast
Allen
That's what i am hoping because you create such real beauties , even when they are sad. Excellent work my friend.
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Outstanding, heart stopping poignancy...well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Paul;-)
This is so sad...and so touching...
What a beautiful write.
You got me crying over here..
Come ON...cheer up my friend....you have me in tears two here!!
Sighhhhhhhh...must be the age thingy!!
Love Tinka :(
It made me so emotional..... this is how I hope not to feel but know that I will and sometimes already do even in my "young age"