Somewhere (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Thnx Felix, this piece is very true in my life. It is too bad that hindsight is always 20/20, and that we now think of what we should have done, or should do. Thnx dear brother, for sharing this wonderfully written, but sad piece. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Felix,

Deeply affecting, poignant poetry--very well expressed. BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Sometimes sipping coffee is easier to swallow. Great write!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Oh how deeply poignant, this is so very touching and excellently expressed,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Having a cuppa while reading this ...all I can say I know the feelings in this poem well!!

Been listening to many a nightmare ....and must admit.... done that myself!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

you have to fill the cup or else it will find other lips to caress ...

poignant and well written ...

Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Sometimes we just lose the love that we share and even though we work hard to regain it, just can't seem to get it back. Too many words spoken or acts of love not shared, makes people look for love somewhere else. It happens to lots of us in our life time, for a reason we can't seem to understand. Just fate I suppose. Very good way of writing what a lot of us feel. Karen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Very sad but well written poem

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

The flow works well in this, it keeps a good pace.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

It's unfortunate when this happens in a marriage, and some marriages do grow stale and uninteresting. I think sometimes it is over realization of each others faults that become magnified under the closeness of life. Other times it is a lack of stimulation and a change of scenery, not enough vacations to look forward too. Let's face it marriage is a job and you have to work at it to keep it interesting. But when all that fails so does the marriage for love needs mutual stimulation. Powerful write and so sad.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

'Somewhere' but not nowhere ... Love is never wasted beautiful Felix!! Thank you for sharing your love!!
Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

ooh Felix.. why have you not written me.. it's been too long

I too share this feeling.. so deep

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Hi Felix:

I'm so glad you are well enough to write again!

This is a painful realization that love was lost. Well-done!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)