Shadow Clock (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2005

A very STRONG poem!
Well done!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

I agree with Aleaxnder Felix..
superb piece..

Vesna..

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

Yes, dear Felix... the shadow is, through your inspiration, telling you that you are steadily walking towards your time of Light. But, do you know... there is actually All forgiveness in this place. Let the Light permeate the shadow... and you will feel that forgiveness permeate your spirit with wonderful visions. Believe it...
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

Felix,
Your muse is clearing the path so that you can move onward and upward, just go with him.
At least he is leading you with epic words and rose scented beauty.
Stunning write Felix!

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

Oh this touched me...been there.just watching that clock ticking the minutes away..without any light to shine upon me!!

Great offering Felix!!

Re: "Red Soil"

Oh boy your "catstew" made me laugh till the early hours of my morning!! That was way tooooooooo good to believe.....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

The clock is the reminder that life is a forward motion and no matter what we think we might have done differently, the die has already been cast. We are living in the here and now with our past only a stepping stone to today. We are still alive with no means to go back and correct what, in hindsight, we think we should/could have done differently. Always keep your focus on the stepping stone directly in front of you as it will lead you into tomorrow. Remember to carry the past with you, only to the extent, that you can use the lessons you have learned, as you continue forward on your life's journey.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

Felix...I am at loss in the words of this poems epic statement. Super in every little word.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

sometimes when we reflect on what we could have done, we accept the premise that we couldn't have done different .... excellent write ...

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

Excellent work....wished I didn't relate so well to this one.
Dan

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

I'm forever punishing myself my friend... always wishing things were different.... time can not change all things though many would like to believe it can

this was great

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

A penetrating write that we wish could have turned out better but we punish ourselves with the mistakes we wish had not happened. Powerful.