Eternal Lingering Traces of Love (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 18, 2005

Due to advice noted and appreciated dicided to change the title of this one after all, perhaps this is more appropriate as to what I was trying to express.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 18, 2005

Darling Pops... there seems to be a kinda cross-the-board concensus that "Dirty" does not enter into this devoted expression of a lifetime of a commitment to "first nights". And I'm with them!! Even if the ideas that are buzzing in that seductive hand and brain are perhaps "unorthodox", let not anything be thought profane that is, within the context of the sacredness of the human bond of love, a tender expression (or not, even!) of connubial bliss. No pressure nor nothin... change the title!! :)) This is altogether where it's at and what it's all about... most of us would consider such long-standing fire to be bliss! :))

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

nothing "dirty" about love and sex ... at any age, they're wonderful experiences to delight in and cherish ... your passionate poem does not reflect the title, it's much too beautiful ...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

"Love" is only a four letter word. At least to me. Why have I been denied that which everyone else has? Thnx for sharing Felix. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn and determined to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

When two people have found the "right" kind of love, it never dies. Well expressed, Felix. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

Don't see anything "dirty" about this. Truth is it sounds pretty clean and good. Nice write.
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Whahahaha...this was good...made me smile...even with a little help from a naughty imagination this could become a great session....right?

Well done Felix old boy!!

Love Tinks

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

True love is never past its prime...

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

This sounds like the most beautiful, precious love possible.
The love God intends for people, but we are our own worst enemies for thinking anything else matters...and wasting time/life.
It is a shame "Dirty" somehow got attached to the most beautiful celebrations of each other possible.
With love we are never old.
:)
John