Trapped in a Dream of Yesterday (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Trapped in a Dream of Yesterday
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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*Trapped in a Dream of Yesterday* *Lady I am truly sorry if I hurt you* *If I tell you why maybe you will understand* *The only way that I could ever love you* *Was if I could just forget holding her hand* *If I could forget the way she touched me* *The way she smiled right into my heart* *The little things she did, things that she never hid* *Then lady maybe we could make another start* *If I could forget her morning kisses,* *Maybe even ignore my nighttime wishes* *If the moon came up to stay if sun would go away* *Then lady maybe in my heart I�d want to stay* *So thank you for your kindness and your offer* *Thank you for seeing things my way* *I wish that I could have been the man you look for* *Not someone trapped in a dream from yesterday.*

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

Such raw, up-front honesty and the desire to do no-one no wrong touches me to the core, Felix. Such compassion and kindness in the "hardness" here... this is what is meant by being "cruel to be kind", I think. In all things, Sir, you are the Knight on whom the Lady bestows her token because in all things you can be trusted. You have my admiration for your integrity and your purity of heart, which shines through everything you write. This is a mirror into your soul, Pops, and such beauty that is found there comes as no surprise. That is why you are so well-loved as a friend and a poet. Bless you always, Kate xx

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Dear Felix,

Dreams give wings to the soul and, as such, can never be viewed as a trap. You have the power to be the man you want to be. You already hold the key to release yourself.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Great poem.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2006

Well expressed Felix..I too relate powerfuly!!!

Love From A Dove

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Such a bitter-sweet romantic piece, beautiful!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Well expressed heartfelt piece Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty

Rhythym, rhyme and ultimate message. Great write. Love, Blue

Reviewed by Janet Parker

What a wonderful poem! There should be more devoted, committed men like you around.

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

you have a tender, romantic heart and it shows in this well done

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Felix,

A heartfelt write, very well expressed.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Felix:

This is an honest write. I'm glad your love is strong, and cannot be swayed.

A Well-written honest piece.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Fee,

You are a true romantic with this verse. Your loving caresses in rhyme and visualsattract the reader. Your passion for romance is evident.

Susan