Sloan's Lake Sweet Youths Passion (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Sloan's Lake Sweet Youths Passion
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Young love and SSSSSSweet passion go hand in hand, they may not always last forever but while they are do they are like lovemaking was invented just for them...
Young lovers out at Sloan’s Lake beneath a star painted sky He pulls her closer to him as she breathes a contented sigh His lips crave hers so sweetly in the magic of the night She offers her response as foreplay, not putting up a fight Fingers fumbling grasping as breasts so tempting viewed Again he vows he loves her and again her faith’s renewed Nipples tingle swollen as hungrily he tastes his first desire Fearful desire in her building too as he lights her maiden fire Hands exploring inside clothes soon make way to snaps undone Heavy breathed promises, moans and groans as two become one Youthful wanting and craving, no match is morality in the dark Awkward but so sensitive they make love like walking in a park Shivers, shudders catch their breath sticky evidence to wipe away Clothes and feelings tied together, now that they had their time to play Words of promise now kept silent, still, goodnight kisses sweet Young love and lusty desire quenched, till tomorrow when again they meet!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on May 10, 2006

FELIX!!! Where did this come from? This is so erotically romantic. Makes me yearn for my first true love. I also have to echo Kate too...just how many of these little "flings" did you have? (Giggles).

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS))))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

sssssweetly expressed of youthful's passion rush

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Such innocent sweetness, wonderful done!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Ahhh... them's were the days, LeRoy (I LIKE it!! :)) Sticky, yes... and bloody awkward when you've a bus to catch!! 1973 revisited, thank you, Felix. D'ya know, I think you have a special recall for these "first times"... how many of them did you have??!! velKro Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

A beautiful passionate UpLiFtInG write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

The heat of passion, there is nothing like it, but all the deception that is employed for the sake of having sex is a shame. Why can't we be honest about our animal lust and not try to candy-coat it with false declarations of love? Nice job, Felix!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

Conscience seems to get lost in the heat of lust.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Young love pushing all the buttons and as awkward as it gets...that first time.

Love this tenderness and for the memory it calls from me.
Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Felix,

This is beautifully passionate and written poetry; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

((( Fee))) here is another passion write on fire...Great imagary...

Peace & Love, Dove