Scary but realistic...you've captured this incident so well...

Safi

"salvation's fluid key" refreshes your soul and gives its sustenance and allows your wings to find it course ... excellent poem, Felix ...

One of your dark writes that shows hope at the end.

Dark, but beautiful.

There is a glimpse of light within.

Thank you for sharing Feix and for commenting on my poem as well. xx

Deep, deep, deep as the soul and the oceans that portray it. This is stunning, Felix, and I think one of your very best. Totally agree with Susan... your Muse soars when water and spirit fly together. Although this expresses bleakness it has the crack of daylight just beaming in through it like a quickening ray. Hope is that shaft of salvation. You give much that we can relate to here, Pops, and much for us to ponder. I ADORE those unstable wooden jettys/boardwalks and can never resist strolling out on them... here it gives like a pirate plank, but the silver glimmer of angel wings await, rather than the bloated arms of ol Davy Jones, I think! Great work, Darlin. LOL Kate xx

Majestic poem
despite the dark day your poem shines with light
love and peace

Good piece Felix ,,,,sometimes you need a dark day to apprieciate the brightness of of the days in the future,,,,may sound corny,,,,,but ive found it to be true.xxxx Dusty

I agree, this is 'spell binding'. There's just something mysterious about a gray, thunderstorm day...

Indeed, very dark, saddening and yet spell binding. Great art!
Love, Birgit and Roger

This photo really added to the poem. I felt the darkness across my computer screen, yet at the same time, dark times can be freeing, change somewhere in the distance and you showed this well towards the end.

Dearest Fee...
Anything to do wih water and your spirit and Muse fly together. You have an incredible ability to create indepth and graphic prose with the heart of a sailor. I do admire that heart and soul of Felix Perry the Poet.
Peace and harmony,
Susan

(((( Hi Fee ))) I send you tons of sunshine your way forever...

Love From Dove