My Sea Shells Lost Directions (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

My Sea Shells Lost Directions
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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To a good friend....

My Sea Shells Lost Directions By: Felix L. Perry Between the teardrops and the mattress Between blankets warm and coffee cold Between believing and walking away There is a price we all must pay Under the stars and over the rainbow Under the clouds drifting ever slow Under the branches of an old oak tree There we learn nothing here is free Over the sound of my heart breaking Over the wound of your heart aching Over all the hopes that could not be I�ll kiss you once then set you free Across the field of dreams I�ll be there Across silent thoughts you often fear Across your mind a dream whisper away I promise you another time another day Into the void of tomorrow no turning back Into the veil of darkness my lonely track Into the future you must travel light Sweet wishes free�goodnight, goodnight!

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 30, 2006

A brilliant romantic and heartbreaking write filled with more beauty than one could imagine!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 29, 2006

LOST DIRECTIONS????!!!! This absolutely takes my breath away, Felix, and creates a vacuum in my heart and a swirling vortex in my mind and soul. Absolutely agonising, but I understand this so well. Totally spot-on. Totally, totally one of your best writes EVER, Pops, and have to say again that it seems to be "the pain that makes the pen fly". Be well, most precious heart. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Meredith Dixon (Reader)

Love so tender and so sweet could not hurt, could it? Hurts to read but what exquisite pain. Beautiful write and what drew me to your poem was your title, "My Sea Shells Lost Directions"!!! Love and God bless, Felix!!!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Across the Miles "Leroy" the sum and substance of it all.

PS, The Name Leroy made me laugh when I was a kid from the Andy Griffith Show, and it still does, so you're stuck with it m8 TEEHEE.
Love Cherrybabe

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Beautiful...

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

This is a beautiful poem. Your touch of words falls like a gentle rain on a SCORCHING afternoon. :) If only love were always this tender - there would be no broken hearts. Of course, we would never know the true meaning of such words if it wasn't for the harshness of loves two edged sword.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Felix,
Your words are always tender and well versed. I've missed reading you and sharing your work.

Lisa

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

The ending is absolutely perfect. Bravo!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Fee
When you really love someone...you never ever really lose them...
They may be travelling in different dimensions...".but their heart is still set on you "....:)
Peter

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

And dreams will be like seashells, gifted to the shore.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Soft and gentle touch of yarning
Very beautiful poem
thanks for sharing
love and peace

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Sweet and tender Fee like the soft whisper of goodbye while the heart aches and yearns...sad Fee.
Susan