Thou Mortal Weak (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2006

Trouble reading the font here too, but I agree with Robert, it cuts to the core this one.. Cheers,
Nicoletta

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Excellent write. I had trouble reading the font because my eyes are so sensitive. I'm headed for the eye doc today.

Reviewed on June 5, 2006

truth denied will eventually catch up with us and we will understand we have been living a lie ...

excellent poem ... it really cuts to the core ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 5, 2006

Rain is most inspiring, Felix. It is a gift. You have used it well here. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Amazing what rain can bring out in you! One of us only get stuck with bad joint pains and you just bloom, Excellent work!
B&R

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Wonderful!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Dreary rain becomes you, Felix, this is very well written. We have no choice but to play the cards that we are dealt, unless of course, we whimp out and pass, but life is for the players, the others are simply the walking dead.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Yet, dear Felix, nothing ventured, nothing gained and you will never win if you haven't the courage to play.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

The Queen of Hearts rules and the Eagles song inspires. Your poem adds credence to the theory of the Meek's enheritance...it's okay to let the Queen lead sometimes Fee.

Love and pace,
Susan

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Wow! I'm impressed, Felix. The rain is truly bringing forth some
fertile writes. Thunderstorms this morning here and torrents of rain. Could see the thunderclouds forming yesterday over the mountains on my way back home. I've been ruminating about old loves myself and the thread that runs through them all. Every relationship is a new creation and woven from former experience. Have come to the conclusion that some are not meant to last, but are there for the lessons we need to learn. Best to bless that gift and absorb the lesson and let go lovingly, tho some leave their mark for a lifetime or lifetimes. Brilliant, emotive write...

Lin

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

I agree with Allen! More Rain!!!! This is great Fee!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

More rain! More Rain! This is good and I really liked.

Allen

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Awwww Fee your going all romantic on me, m8 keep this up and you will be redoing Romeo and Juliet in no time.
Actually more like Samson and Delilah for this offering.
Take a bow dear friend.
Hugs
Ch'erie

Yes I know, I am still in the black, I havent left, just waiting on management to do the necessary!!!

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Felix, this is an intresting write, friend..Keep them coming..

Xxxx dove

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Felix
I agree with Sandie below completely...
Remorse is an unadulterated curse, we should stay true to ourselves, and stay the course, believing that all our decision making were the right ones at the time...
I hope you stay strong and resolute...
Peter

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Sometimes our memories is our own consciousness that triggers our own course of remorse. Some people would go through a lifetime of conscious remorse that eats them up emotionally.

Hope you'll feel better soon. Good luck!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)