Cheat (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 8, 2006

I'm slowly making an attempt to catch up on all I've missed. great take on the acrostic variation... not always an easy task, but you've made it flow without force. Painful subject beautifully handled.
Taylor

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Well I think you about covered the devestation. Great write. Another sad tale.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Another fantastic and excellent write from you Felix.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 14, 2006

Moving and heartbreaking, Felix, you are a true master of the pen!
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 14, 2006

Moving verses that speak honest and sad truth, Felix. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on July 14, 2006

Powerful poetry very well done. Sorry I haven't been around to read more lately as I have been in and out of the hospital.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 14, 2006

I hear yah, this speaks volumes Fee,
from the heart.
Hope all is well with you too, catch you soon
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

An acrostic that paints a vivid picture.
Very well done, Fee. Bravo!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

Excellent...this hits homeground Wham!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

Clever acrostic, Felix.

Enjoyed...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

splendid acrostic, Fee...I love how you made a stanza out of each letter as opposed to only a line

Susan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

When we make that step over the line to stray we affect everyone dear to us as well. If the insighr were available ahead of time about the ramafications...then most would decide differently.Unfortunately, acting upon impulse gets a lot of people hurt and the ricochet is felt for many years.
Well stated my wise Fee. Well structured and well stated.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

The price one pays for a folly repented of, but seared anothers heart.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

i'm not sure whether to say don't jump or you cad! good poem

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 13, 2006

Felix

A brilliant and powerful acrostic...

You have a way with words..

Peter