Please Mommy (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A beautiful message from a sorrowing child to a grieving mother. I hope Mommy can trust the little sister to God. It has to be the hardest thing in the world to lose a child. He understands.

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Wow this hurts...a child's hope and longing. Powerful and emotive Fee. Panda :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

beautifully spoken with the love of a child's heart ...

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Oh my....This is to sad. Well penned, soaked in emotion!!
\/vvv\/ <----- Rottie Smile

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

"I'll love you more than enough for two..."
Wow, does that ever tug at the heart, Fee!
Powerful piece!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

A moving testament to the most basic, most powerful, and most unassailable force on planet earth.

LOVE!

Why aren't there more true expressions of it?

excellent!
Richard

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Tears!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

How sweet, honest and dear while deeply hurting at the same time. We wish the best for your dear friend, lots of strength and the ability to see the little child who needs much love.It is often so hard to deal with loss and pain and with those who still need us. We'll keep her in our prayers.
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Awwww, Fee, this one hurts...but brims with tears of hope. Beautifully penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

This one aims straight for the heart!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

oh, Felix, I needed this as well. A friend reminded me a couple of days ago, that I need to focus on the children I still have at home...

Susan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

This is very touching...a golden touch by your love and compassion for others. Fee...you have a heart that is huge and open...always. This is what I admire about you...your genuine love for others comes through in all of your writes.

Love and peace...
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Fee

You have a heart of gold, and you are a true companion to your friends..

The world needs more people like you..

Peter

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

A heartfelt and moving write! Often we forget the grieves from our little ones. Your poem is a good reminder. Thank you Fee!

Sandie Mau Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)