A golden ring sits on the stand

Hey Santa! I adore your soul transference poetry! Man, Ya can really write! Smooches SC

wow..the ending threw me. this is very good!!

This can really wake someone up in a hurry. Those final words, final looks, and the the tears. It is so sad when two people who fellin love, have to fall out of it.

I could feel the emotion in this piece Felix, I could "see" the empty closet through the door half open. I "saw" the ring on the dresser and "smelled" the odor of drifitng perfume. I "saw" the pillow that had not been slept on, and the tissues in the wastebasket.

This is a great piece Felix, because the imagery, teh plot, and the emotion are all true to life. And, true IN life too. Thank you for sharing this.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you lvoe, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peae on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFULSISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

That is really amazing, i love the perfect flow of the entire poem.

Once again it is always a pleasure to be able to read such fine work written from an artist as yourself.

Awesome write, my friend.
I could feel the emptiness and heartbreak in this write.
So glad it's fiction!

~Linda

how all too honest, fiction though it is, you've so captured this sad and lonely scene with a passion and a beauty all your own, what an insightful, excellence, here, dear Felix and glad for you it is, indeed, fiction!
Hugs,
m.

Fiction or no fiction I could feel the friction!!

Well written Felix!!

Love Tinka

I'm glad it's only fiction too... those lingering images can surely haunt.

Myrna

Felix, this is sad, beautiful.... an excellent write!!

Peace. Joyce

Fee

This is a tragic and realistic piece of in your face fiction..
Palpable

Peter

Oh Fee, I have goosebumps all up and down my arms -- this is so tragic. This is a well-written account of such a sad event (and I do pray that it is fiction).
Many hugs,
Your friend,
CJ

Fee,

Cruel, indeed....glad it's only fiction. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I'm glad its only fiction, but good ficttion nonetheless.

Elizabeth

Felix, this is wonderful written, it deeply touches each corner of the heart, rocks our emotions. Brilliant.
Love and Peace,
B&R

an vivid emotional capture, Felix ...

Felix, this is perfection. You captured the feeling and setting with acuity! Perfection, Felix!

Susan

Fee, this is haunting and powerfully sad but brilliant. You capture superbly that feeling of sorrow when no more embers glow. Love Panda :)

For me Felix this is not fiction and you capture the departure time of this last fight emotionaly..... Well done FEE!!!!!!

Blessings, Joselyn

I hope this was a nightmare you had!
Profound in it's entirety.
Love Ch'erie

How sad. That two grown ups cannot iron out their differences through dialogue. But the real reason is loss of love. And once lost, this picture leaps up. Great poem. Victor

Too sad....

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

life is cruel when we are selfish, or jealous or hysr don't make the grade in another's eyes. It's worse when there is no conditioning. This is sad all the way down to the abyss where we collect those hurting memories.
love and peace,
susan