Making love on the sand with the ocean lapping around is just the most awesome feeling, aaaah but its been a long time..
You brought back wonderful memories here Fee, blast yer hide LOL
A sensual and passionate write that any romantic would appreciate but for me the clincher was in the last lines.
"A promise is given
No one had to speak."
Oh this is filled with all the right touches...."
"A kiss on an eyelid
Sweet fingers on cheek
A promise is given
No one had to speak."
Blanketed in sand...you can feel it!
....ALMOST silent, dear Felix... but how can I be after so long away??? :)) Well, you old SaltSeducer... how many of us gals here now find ourselves Beach Babes??!! :)) Reckon you'd charm the mermaids right out of the sea with poetry like this... just LOVE "Wet suits in the sands Two naked as one"... definitely worth peelin off for, I'd say, though maybe a bit parky for me on the local nudist beach right now... reckon that wetsuit would take a while to unglue from frozen limbs... though a bit of passion might speed the process, I guess... NOW you got me thinkin... I'll DEFINITELY be on the lookout for a few shed skins after this write tomorrow! LOL Good to be home! K xx
Mmmmm, as soon as I saw the title, I just knew it was going to be extraordinary, Fee. It is, and totally so. It's a beauty and a keeper for all time -- hope you don't mind that I print it.
She's a lucky lady -- you so beautifully wear your love on your shirt sleeves.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
Great write and makes one wish for great things from both of you. Victor
S-h-h-h, The passions become magnified as the power of the ocean merges with lovers and their rhythm. I wish everyone had the chance to make love in the surf. There's magic that spoils afterwards. Isn't this pen a glorious memory, Fee. You gave us the magic of the ocean with the beat of two hearts in a moving poem.
Thank you my dear friend.
Susan
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Exceptional work Fee..love it..every single line!!!!!!
Thanks
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You brought back wonderful memories here Fee, blast yer hide LOL
:) Ch'erie
"A promise is given
No one had to speak."
The language of love needs no words.
Chanti
"A kiss on an eyelid
Sweet fingers on cheek
A promise is given
No one had to speak."
Blanketed in sand...you can feel it!
Taylor~
Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
peace,
Joselyn
She's a lucky lady -- you so beautifully wear your love on your shirt sleeves.
Love,
CJ
Thank you my dear friend.
Susan
Lovely writing...
Myrna
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Siiiiiggggghhhhh.......................
Lisa
Your special friend will be delighted with this gem
Peter