The Ripples of Time and Sin (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

This is a very painful read. I know the anguish people feel when they reach this point. Sometimes we just reach those who need help. This was a pain filled poem, yes, but also very powerful. ~ Sara

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

wow...sadness in spades. Deep write Fee.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Fantastic write....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

so visual
very very good!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

A gripping account that is sad and replete with despair. The reader cannot help but be drawn in. Well done, Fee. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

hmmm..Fee..now ya have me worried..

this is so well written..too well..it has me all a dither and pondering dire thoughts..oh dear me..

this sure is different from your other pieces..

Vesna

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

you've captured the heaviness of one's heart that has overwhelmed his senses and leads him down a road of depair ...

excellent ... very powerful ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

We poets who live near water always have the tales of the blind side of hearts. I suppose it is a compliment to see all sides of longing and to be able to paint the pains such as they are. My dear Fee...you are so very special.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Excellent images.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Goodness, very sad.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Dawn Field (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

What a sad poem.It is very well written. ~D~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

This is heartbreaking.....hope all is fine Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

TRAGIC!!! You had me gripped, Felix, and my heart almost responded like a disturbed flock of geese at the shock of the gun... Especially as I initially thought the picture was of me in my new environment, which made me personalise as I read this. Very well done... you are always able to get inside the most disturbed head... and yes, that's sposed to be a compliment! :)) LOL K xx

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Sounds Suicidal, Hope it's just the melancholia talking Fee!

Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Powerful stuff you have penned today, Fee; excellent, excellent write! BRAVO; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Powerfully poignant poetry, Fee, one feels the loneliness and despair in these words. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Excellant

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

The road to suicide is terrible, only the person himself or herself knows. Pity suicide does not solve much, but who can judge these people? Great poem, handled with finesse. Victor

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Fee

You bring us all back down to earth with a bang..;-)
A sobering thought amidst the hurly burly of 21 st Suburbia !

Peter

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Geez oh man, Fee, this is powerful. You leave your reader wanting more here. Excellent poem, excellent imagery to create the mood and impending doom. Spine-tingling.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

this makes my heart heavy just reading it! well-written...you expressed the emotions of one who has reached the breaking point very well. so sad

Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

The last resort for one in deep despair.

Teardrops linger as an afterthought