Surrender's Disarray (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Wow! That's DEEP! FEE - your style of writing is catchy to the eye also with the colors and seperation - I believe I know of "Who" or "What" you speak of- The negativity is felt here in a few lines, and then choices... Great thought pre-voking Poem for sure! I Enjoyed the feelings that welled up inside. WArm HuGs, Sheee

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

i agree well expressed and the depth is excellent in this one FEE!!!!!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

This was a very good piece Felix...the thought lines are deep in reason...well done

Allen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

i totally agree with the proem and the message of this poem is wisely expressed ... it is a well balanced poem with some powerful philosophical content and imagery ...

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Great write!

Chrissy

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

A dramatic delivery of a most profound message, Felix. Great job!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Well written; such truth to this one!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Intense poetry here Felix!!

Loce Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Profound, deep message here, Fee; done in your own special way. Very well done; bravo, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Profound, thought provoking message, done in initimitable Fee style and grace; well done, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Great style here, and the message is delivered in a dramatic way that sticks with the reader bravo
pax A

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Fee

I concur with the consensus of opinion below completely

To vanquish the enemy...you must first know, and then dominate his mindset..

Peter

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Very descriptive Felix.. and I agree to win we must know and understand both...

Myrna

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

wow, Felix! This poem is filled with passion...intensity! Great, great work!

Susan

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Chuan Tzu gave five rules for combat and in this battlefield it seems most appropriate, ...choose your allies carefully, choose the time carefully as well as the place, strategise carefully but most important of all before going into battle, have faith in who you are fighting for...your poetry brought this to mind. Indeed 'for purity you will pay a price'...but with true Faith in Him and strong spirit inside, we have the armour we need. A wise message here Fee, very strong. Love and hugs Panda :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

There is truth in legend and evil is all over history,with satan dictating the moves.
Very well stated pen with wisdom the messenger. How are you Fee?
love and peace.
susan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

I do not know if you did this on purpose, but this describes the Antichrist to perfection. So many will fall prey to him. But by his actions he will show his hand. Whether we will suffer for Christ or not is another matter. Victor

feel the heat of holy madness