A very stunning write with soft words of questions
Of love and combined into a song of romance
with an interesting ending!
This is a very smooth and rhythmic poem
And it spells out your intense feelings.
Excellent display of your emotions great
Imagery and flow outstanding choice of words and tone
Nicely written love poem!!
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
Wow Felix, if she doesn't melt reading this one she has a heart of stone. Drop her and give that undying love to another! Very well done and very beautiful spoken from a heart of love.
Hugs
Tina
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Romance in beautiful and perfumed essence. Great. Victor
A romantic offering....but I got the feeling there was a tiny bitter twist at the end...get deeper into that cushion above the heart and you will hear much more... :) !!
LUcky YOu Sweet Fee~! I am smiling ear 2 ear for ya'
This is so precious!
Sweet as honey!
YOu honest I must say~
I love how you decided to write this out too~
Did it take awhile to come (The wording) together Sweets?
Warm WArm HugS,Sheee
... and with a smile on my lips and a heart that is both stilled and thrilled by such stirring devotion, I'm away to me bed... You sure know how to make one feel welcome, Pops! Don't think your Baby would ever be allowed to remain with cold feet! I think this rates as one of your very, very best romance writes... and there have been many. Effortless rhyming, melting sentiments expressed in syllables a heart longs to beat to. And may yours be her echo. TOTALLY GORGEOUS... last stanza MWAH!! :)) LOL K xx
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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Of love and combined into a song of romance
with an interesting ending!
This is a very smooth and rhythmic poem
And it spells out your intense feelings.
Excellent display of your emotions great
Imagery and flow outstanding choice of words and tone
Nicely written love poem!!
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
Chrissy
A beautiful and Romantic poem!
The gal who this is for should be happy!!
I am actually Jealous!
Love ya!
Becca
P.S. Thanks for the Beautiful comments.
vesna:)
Myrna
I like this one, it's a keeper/
TY Dear one
Ch'erie
You deserve all of her charms!
Be well,
Penny
Hugs
Tina
Love Tinka
Spasiba,
~D.
This is so precious!
Sweet as honey!
YOu honest I must say~
I love how you decided to write this out too~
Did it take awhile to come (The wording) together Sweets?
Warm WArm HugS,Sheee
What a sweet poem!