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Step Away From The Heart Please
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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I just love those talking car alarms though they scare the crap out of me sometimes...

Step Away From The Heart Please


 


Please look all you want, we don’t mind if you do


Yes, Its an older model, we don’t claim to be new


It’s been loved well by a few, hurt bad by a score


Its got a few miles left though, if you don’t treat it poor


Its as is…where is, no you can’t part some of it out,


But with a little TLC though it’ll change all your doubt


No tryout, no discount, ma’am there’s no guarentee


Yet I’m sure if you take it, you’ll love it, you’ll see


Take it or leave it, this deal will be gone if you sneeze


If not truly interested, step away from the heart please.


 


 


 


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Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
Yep, sadly I guess the heart is always vulnerable, but it's little voice is always so much wiser than any mechanical voice on the outside,..cleverly done here Fee. Hope all ok? Panda :)

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Oh how sweet! Yes we can be loved - and hurt - at any age. Thanks for touching this particular pen to paper.
Monette

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
very clever analogy, Felix ... a car is like a heart, it needs to be maintenanced ....

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Excellent and well stated in the end the heart is untouchable it needs sencerity... if we are wise. Excellent FEE!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Only the faithful and dedicAted need apply. I hear you Fee. It applies to this heart as well.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Very nice work! Well Done.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Some great analogy here Felix... neat little piece!

Myrna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Old cars and old women are very much the same...they think they can keep up with the youth but damn my old back is acting up AGAIN!!

Need a new Ticker anyone????

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Old cars are always a lovely sight to see though they do require great care and quite an expense. Loved the poem. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Oh Fee, this is not only beautiful, but also clever. I especially love the line, "Take it or leave it, this deal will be gone if you sneeze." Excellent poem, excellent sentiments.
Love,
CJ



Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Gota' LOVE them Oldie but Goodies!!!
My Fav~ 69 Camero *( my brother is selling his Blue one, just bought a house ) Awwwwwwww, ~ We have no room~ And... already have a 2nd Vehicle!
Love this my Sweet Fee~
I love your humor with it and how it is written too!
Enjoy! Your! Day!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Filled with PEACE, Love and Humor!


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