This poem I would like to offer to Dove, a friend and a great poet who do to technicality I lost for awhile in the den's mystery room...
My OfferedHeart
My shoulders strong
If something’s wrong
You know you can lean on me
My arms reach out
When hurts about
Our friendship is the key
I’ll be your light
On the darkness night
My strength I’ll offer thee
I’ll hold you near
Whisper soft in your ear
How much you mean to me
Warm is your heart
I want to share e a part
Of your life eternally
Feel my lips tender
My soul I surrender
Your desire touches me
My shoulders strong
This can’t be wrong
Oh won’t you come to me…
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Reviews of "My Offered Heart"
Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2006
Tender pleadings here, Fee. We ladies LOVE to be whispered to soft and low. Friendship is the key to a deeper love and happy relationship. You beared your heart here and I love it!
Be well,
Penny
Awesome yes everyone needs
A shoulder to lean on or to cry and
a loving comforting friend or lover to
Share your thoughts with..
It shows the Beautiful kindness of your heart!
outstanding Imagery and tone great rhythm!!
Peace Love and a Merry Christmas To You....Morning Star
This is a great way to open up the net and come over to the Den. Nothing like a little No-violent crisis intervention and I'm happy that license proved worthy. It's great to see you two are "found".
love,
Susan
Felix, the scope of your kindness, love and support knows no bounds. Truly, your heart beats with every kind of love there is going - from agape to purely sensual; from eros to overwhelming compassion. Whether male or female, we know we can always count on your tenderness and strong protection, whatever the storm. We love you here. And I equally love Dove's due response, which sets out so much more than the single word "love" on its own can ever express. I can never understand why you should suffer with heart problems... I reckon it's because you have one that is twenty sizes too big for your chest cavity, that's all!! :)) This is a remarkable testimony to friendship and of a "being there" that so many of us have perhaps no experience of on a natural plane. And Poppy?? Nah... your heart is as de Rose... :))
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
It is good to give support to a fellow poet who suffers. Victor
A beautiful tribute to a precious Soul here at the Den, write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
Everyone needs a shoulder to lean on.Being there for your friend or true love is what counts.Passionate write,Fee.
Merry Christmas
Michael
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
Sssssoooo precious, GOd, thank YOU Felix..God, what God did make one of HIS worthy earth angels...You make me SMILE up to my eyes...I leave you with some powerful quotes..I hope you enjoy them Fee!! Love, Dove
True friendship is like sound health; the value of it is seldom known until it be lost."
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"Each friend represents a world in us, a world possibly not born until they arrive, and it is only by this meeting that a new world is born."
"My friends are my estate."
"A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out."
"A friend is one who walks in when others walk out"
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"A friend is someone who is there for you when he'd rather be anywhere else."
"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart, and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."
"A friend is one who believes in you when you have ceased to believe in yourself."
"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow.
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.
Walk beside me and be my friend."
"A hug is worth a thousand words. A friend is worth more."
"Everyone is a friend, until they prove otherwise."
"Every person is a new door to a different world."
"It takes a long time to grow an old friend."
"Your friend is the man who knows all about you, and still likes you."
"I get by with a little help from my friends."
- John Lennon
"Two are better than one; because they have a good reward for their labour. For if they fall, the one will lift up his fellow: but woe to him that is alone when he falleth; for he hath not another to help him up."
"Two may talk together under the same roof for many years, yet never really meet; and two others at first speech are old friends."
"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather is one of those things that give value to survival."
"I might give my life for my friend, but he had better not ask me to do up a parcel."
"Friends are the most important ingredient in this recipe of life."
"The better part of one's life consists of his friendships."
"The love of my life is the love between friends."
"One's best friend is oneself."
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"A Friend is someone who knows all about you and loves you anyway!!!"
-
"To be depressed is to be lonely; to have a friend is to be happy..."
1) "Make new friends and keep the old, one is silver and the other gold"
2) "Make new friends, both young and old, one in Silver, the other Gold."
3) "Make new friends but keep the old, some are silver and others are Gold"
4}"I have a hand, and you have another; put them together and we have each other."
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Be well,
Penny
A shoulder to lean on or to cry and
a loving comforting friend or lover to
Share your thoughts with..
It shows the Beautiful kindness of your heart!
outstanding Imagery and tone great rhythm!!
Peace Love and a Merry Christmas To You....Morning Star
Take care,
Sherry
love,
Susan
God Bless
Michelle~
Merry Christmas
Michael
True friendship is like sound health; the value of it is seldom known until it be lost."
-
"Each friend represents a world in us, a world possibly not born until they arrive, and it is only by this meeting that a new world is born."
"My friends are my estate."
"A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out."
"A friend is one who walks in when others walk out"
-
"A friend is someone who is there for you when he'd rather be anywhere else."
"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart, and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."
"A friend is one who believes in you when you have ceased to believe in yourself."
"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow.
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.
Walk beside me and be my friend."
"A hug is worth a thousand words. A friend is worth more."
"Everyone is a friend, until they prove otherwise."
"Every person is a new door to a different world."
"It takes a long time to grow an old friend."
"Your friend is the man who knows all about you, and still likes you."
"I get by with a little help from my friends."
- John Lennon
"Two are better than one; because they have a good reward for their labour. For if they fall, the one will lift up his fellow: but woe to him that is alone when he falleth; for he hath not another to help him up."
"Two may talk together under the same roof for many years, yet never really meet; and two others at first speech are old friends."
"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather is one of those things that give value to survival."
"I might give my life for my friend, but he had better not ask me to do up a parcel."
"Friends are the most important ingredient in this recipe of life."
"The better part of one's life consists of his friendships."
"The love of my life is the love between friends."
"One's best friend is oneself."
-
"A Friend is someone who knows all about you and loves you anyway!!!"
-
"To be depressed is to be lonely; to have a friend is to be happy..."
1) "Make new friends and keep the old, one is silver and the other gold"
2) "Make new friends, both young and old, one in Silver, the other Gold."
3) "Make new friends but keep the old, some are silver and others are Gold"
4}"I have a hand, and you have another; put them together and we have each other."
love Tinka
Myrna