Love Should Be Spelled Disappointment
Through the fog two hearts collide
In wonderment and hope
Champagne bubbles over candlelight
Sweet smell of scented soap
Laughter over little things
Tears when hearts are bared
Learning trust craving forever
Day by day two souls are shared
A fairytale romance is written
Punctuated with kisses sweet
Ecstasy in the dark of night
Each day a paragraph complete
Lulled to sleep the story tends
To promise true enjoyment
Till a page is torn and without warning
Love is suddenly spelled disappointment
Chrissy
Punctuated with kisses sweet
Ecstasy in the dark of night
Each day a paragraph complete
I love these words. They are perfect and say it all. Love has a strange way of making us cry with tears of happiness and cry when we get hurt. Another well penned poem, Fee.
~Hugs~
Karen
Well said,
Michael
Blessings,
Sharon
Love Tinka
Carole~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love doesb't keep an agenda
whether it's perfect or not
suspicious or hot...
it's a mystery
Like all mortal history. Your poem of experience allows us to think about our romances. This is a terricic poem Fee and Marcia is a wise woman beyond earth boundaries.
Love,
Susan
Excellently penned, and portrayed, how the lovers' pendulum, swings ..both ways.
Never give up believing!!!
Love&Hugs&Blessings, Rhonda
This one hurts....deeply felt, powerfully penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I'm so used to your romantic writes being always sweet to the very end.
Throughout my lifetime I've had a few encounters with love that I thought it should have been spelled hell, but disappointment would have worked too!
Lots of ceativity in this one.
Lisa