Nay...Never, Nay...More (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

On silvered wings of the wind

Thru whispered sighs of a cloud

O�er the land best forgotten

I fly nobly though not proud

Shattered hopes of tomorrow

Surround like an unholy shroud

Capture past serious misgivings

To encircle judgment�s crowd

Close to the heavens of angels

The drums cadence beats loud

Black obsidian soul rendered

Nay�to no dark devil I'll bow.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 8, 2007

Very different, Fee! I enjoyed this -- you are a poet of many facets, each as gifted as the other.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on March 6, 2007

No, nay, never, amen!

Blessings,
Sharon

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on March 6, 2007

Amen...

Chrissy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Powerful offering Felix!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

excellent; love it, fee! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Nay Indeed!

:)Ch'erie

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

EXCELLENT! I love the confidence in this!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

An interestingly powerful write
A somewhat wild picture there...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

deeply felt and really well written,

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

You are the fearless one, like me. Call a spade a spade, lecture the weak and honor the brave. I want to be standing next to you in the end Fee.

Love,

Susan

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

temptation is not so easy to overcome but depth of character will succeed in doing so ... you brought out this state of mind quite effectively, Felix ...

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Great charactization here Fee. I can feel a short story coming from this.

Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Nay�to no dark devil I'll bow

well done strength of character

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

This one ensights the darkness well FEE! What an art piece.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

i really liked this felix

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Oh dear Cuz, tis indeed the dark side of you coming through, Let the light shine with passion. Nice write. Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Has this anything to do with the Wild Rover, darlin Pops?? Is he rattling his skeleton in your broom cupboard again? That old Black Dog does come tongue-lolling round us at times, trying to lick our face with his evil smelling breath of a murky past. But he's had his day. Now is where we are, and grateful for the light which shines its path upwards and onwards towards the new dawn. Your darker moments always bring out such lucid expression, Felix, and, very often, your dogged fighting spirit, too. Be well, warm and cosy... and looks like this little angel could do with a bit of TLC, too!! You'll be there to answer her prayer, I have no doubt! Bless you, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

It was a pleasure to read the poetry you have shared with our readers, look forward to viewing more....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Darkly compelling, Felix. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

A good write I read, sending some Light from here. Lady J