Across The Stars (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Across The Stars
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Love and stars and the moon...such a close bond of intimacy they share.
*Across The Stars* *Knock gently on the moonlight* *on the far side of the moon* *Don�t yell or speak too loudly* *in the sunshine of the noon* *I am only here for a little while* *till the stars revoke my name* *So lets share a little magic* *I still need love the same* *Hold me but don�t imprison* *my heart that needs to breathe* *Welcome me but smile for me* *When it�s time for me to leave* *In the heartbeat of a second* *when time seems to stand still* *A sweet kiss can last eternity* *goodbye just seems a bitter pill* *Snap a mind picture for tomorrow* *to look back upon today* *If I�m not here I�m gone off* *to maybe ride the Milky Way* *Ah�but if you ever need me* *blink twice and I�ll be back* *I�ll ride a shooting comet* *star train running on star track*

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Very lovely Fee...a most gentle ring to it..

Myrna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 26, 2007

:) A Beauty Felisx!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

(((Fee))),

Dancing through the cosmos, you've penned a beautiful, beautiful write! Well done, my (((friend))), well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Excellent write, Fee; well done, my friend! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by CJ Heck

What a lovely picture you've painted here, Fee. This simply resonates with love. An exceptional poem, but then, I've come to expect that with all of your writes, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Beautiful imagery with a powerful message of love. "Blink twice and I'll be back", love that line!
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Love has no bounds, and your thoughts express this as you find the stars and moon to build upon the eternity of everlasting love....

very nice work....

enjoyed ......Art Sun...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

A bit of magic from your pen today, Felix;I really like this poem and your rhyme is perfection and unforced. You must know by now that I am partial to the ones that rhyme. ;) This certainly ranks up there with my favorites of yours. Wonderful offering, my friend.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Thanks for the starry ride - it was heavenly!
Monette

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

This was really good. I love the picture you wrote. Also hold me don't imprison me. That is a special request. Lady J