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Dare To Judge
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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I posted this here because I appreciate and welcome honest feedback...

Dare To Judge?

 

 

I wondered what form to use when I wrote this but decided to speak informally and without punctuation for...my topic concerns literary snobs and art bigots

 

you see I read something today that really pissed me off

 

it actually shocked and disgusted me to say the very least

 

I read another poet say things like there is no place for amateurs, no place for people who made mistakes or don’t edit properly, no place for non-professionals

 

I read on as she stated that there is  no place on the den for people who have published works that aren’t selling, for people who post their works that aren’t on the market

 

well to all of that I say she is full of herself and full of bullshit

 

 

poets are not born in the classroom, I admire those who do spend years in a classroom honing their skills but without heart and without soul they are just mechanics of words

 

poets learn by writing and writing and writing, pouring out their life stories, their emotions, their viewpoints and that is what writing is about

 

poets should have one real goal and that is to reach out and touch the senses and emotions of others

 

poets all  express themselves differently some like to write simple, straight forward lines and messages others like to write vague and opaque with hidden messages and meanings there is room for all styles

 

poets are educated or uneducated, young or old, rhyming or un-rhyming, white or black, rich or poor and published or unpublished

 

poets though mostly should never offer other poets anything less than constructive advice and encouragement


 


Poets who seem to think that they alone have a monopoly on using the den as their own personal advertising and marketing site while knocking others have no place here


 

I am a poet, I do not claim to be a great poet or an educated one, in fact I have only a Grade Ten education but when I write I write from my heart and that is what matters to me


 


When a new writer comes on board we should all welcome them with open arms for they just may be the next classic poet of tomorrow.


 

 

 

 
 


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 Reviews of "Dare To Judge"
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
I agree with Miss Defy,people with closed minds should learn to keep their mouths closed as well.
I feel and have always felt, if you can make one person smile a day and feel good about themselves, that is what counts in this world of so much negativety. Good write dear cuz. Love & hugs

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
I agree totally with you on your subject.It is from the deep cores of ones heart a true artist creates.It may not be the best seller or written by people who have many MA's but if even a wood cutter can sing a tune of the forest that is in his heart, to his sweet heart and his family then I believe he is a true poet or writer without even having to find the approval of any listeners to justify his love.You are damn right Felix when you said that a poet or writer needs an honest feed back.There are lot of ego smooching about with the kind of people you mentioned above who sneers at poets or writers with mistakes.

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Jolly good show Fee! I have this THING I do. Even when I detect misspellings, grammar and so forth, I try and detect the full intent of the writer. I've seen some very straightforward and 'simple' poetry that holds grand meaning. I say that readers and writers should read, write and critique; not exclude! There's room for everyone. To be frank, I often notify a writer of mistakes; but other times I just imbibe the message of the writer and either critique it or move on. -- Jeff

Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Hear ye' Hear ye' Sweet FEE!
I got ya'in my back pocket!
I totally agree!
A poem springs forth their imagination, to touch the heart of
those who listen closely!
Stay Strong!
Stay Positive!
We do what we Believe in Ourselves, this writing talen that was given!
Is a BLESSING!
Remember! You who feel different, you could lose it all - that what would you do! It was given to you, by the experiences you have been through! ETC.
Thanks! Fee, for letting us voice our feelings on this very Important matter!
PEACE and WArm HuGs,WArmly WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
It is more important to bring a thought, smile and some challenge someones way, then to Publish today!
And... for this critique, about publishing... It is very expensive and who's to say when your book/etc. is bought, that's it's not sitting on a shelf and never read! The Internet has it's place, for those who feel the need to express and Share!!!! YOu have something to say to me, come to my corner of the den! We all have been the chosen ones! As I said, it can be taken away in some way...Let us All enjoy OUR Blessings! I will pray that your heart softens!

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
I am one who chooses not to post much of what I do, but to use AD to gain attention for what I do have and can do (not working) but for anyone to presume that the AD can and should only be used one way is - well, just go make her own website then! We as creators need an outlet, and this is it, to use as we will, as long as we follow the AD guidelines. Some people criticize because that's all they're good at.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Yeah and Shakespeare was never more popular than he is today, he was never copywritten, 400 years ago they didnt have that.
So whats this woman on about, it's all twaddle.
Some of us cant afford to rake up the dough to be published, at the mo, Im one of them, but I just write what comes to heart and mind, and if it helps someone, brightens their day, lifts their spirits, or makes them laugh, GREAT!
After all that is what being a poet/writer is supposed to be about, not whether or not they have recieved accolades yet, or making money out published works HUH, wot a joke!!
Thanks for the rant Fee, it needed to be said...LOL, stone the crows matey ( there theres some good ole slang fer yah, a mixture of OZ and American haha)
And now I must be off to see who has misspelled wrords tinight, sorry Im dyslexic, it happens, no spell chekcer ere ROFLMAO.
HUGS
Chezza

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
No right to Judge is well put Fee!!!! I agree we should not judge we can offer help but only in a loving and respectful way the quickest way to destroy ones own writing career or hobby is to critic roughly. Thank God for I make so so so many mistakes... Happy Easter,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Thank you..Fee you are correct on this
subject no one is perfect we all misspell
words but as you said we all have our own
unique way of expressing our thoughts
and we all have the right to post our work
and as you said you write from the heart
and I believe we all write from the heart whoever
doesnt appreciate a writer or their work just don't
read or review!!
Thank you for standing for our work,And keep up the flooooow
Wishing you and your family a very Happy Easter!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
To thine own self be true; set your own sail; and so on -- a writer does not have to publish to be a successful writer. We must always remember that so much is in the eye of the beholder, but that, too, is part of the mystery and the beauty of writing. On the personal side, I really enjoy the work of the poets on AD -- Keep on Felix with your good works. R

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Amen! Writers write, even if they don't make as much money as Capote (another literary snob, talented as he was). I do get so disgusted by such snobbery. I enjoy the poets here on the den, though for some this is a fun 'hobby' in their spare time. All are welcome!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Thank you Fee for giving it the person who had the brass balls (excuse the french) to ridicule anyone here at the Den. Being a poet/writer comes from the heart and soul. We may not have six figure contracts with a major publisher, but we have heart and soul and share our inner post emotions with each other through our written words.

So what if we make mistakes, typos or grammetical. We are all writers and look forward to reading each others works and sharing our hearts desires. We don't have to go to college to learn how to write, the words come from within and there is no schooling that can ever make that happen.

If this person has as problem with the Den, than he/she doesn't have to come on here. Some of the most famous poets weren't recognized or honored to after their death. Through Authors Den we are famous poets who aren't afraid to express our thoughts and feelings.

Thanks again Fee for defending all your friends here on the Den.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I've noticed there are those here who write professionally, those who aspire to write professionally, those who will never write professionally,those who write many poems each day (there's seldom quality in quantity though), and those who post just to post for their own therapy. A diverse group?? Oh yeah...but there are many extremely talented writers here and rather than judge anyone, this community would best be served through honest reviews, not the 'good-ole-boys club' critique that does nothing to encourage the growth of a writer. Snobbery doesn't encourage anyone. If you don't appreciate a writer or their work just don't read it...its that simple. Good insight Fee.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
perhaps one day humanity may realize the connection to itself, reflected and mirrored, lived, experienced, from all possible perceptions...every artist is unique, every human being is unique, every opinion is unique...in a balanced world all excepts all...good and bad, pleasure and pain, understanding it all has deeper purpose in the end...it is heroic of you Felix to stand up for another, it is heroic of all who place reviews to stand up for what they perceived from the writing...it takes tremendous courage to be a writer displayed on a site like this for many, knowing everything about their work becomes exposed and vulnerable for not only other artists, but the general public as well...we become both the judged and the judge

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Dear Felix,
I've hardly read anything these past two weeks (sick), but I'm glad that I read this. I don't know who you are speaking of, but I appreciate your defense of us all!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I will thank you from my heart Felix, for speaking up for us, I love to post my poetry on AD and hope that someone will enjoy the words I have shared with them. I do write from my heart as I believ most do, that is what makes them a true Author and Poet.

Thank you again, Love Your Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Felix, thank you for writing, I am in total agreement with your poem. One of the things I've learned through the years is that we can't expect people to express themselves whether in Poetry or any form of art if we become exclusionary because of education or lack thereof.

Keep writing
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I see AD as a place where I can say what I feel and feel what other have to say!!

I agree we all have to start somewhere...and AD is the place I started to write...I don't know the skills...but I do know what i feel deep inside about people without hearts!!

Write right on dear Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 7, 2007

"Dare To Judge"

BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO YOU KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR!

YOU GOT THAT RIGHT...my feelings if one doesn't mind...As an artist/poet I feel it is my duty to accept other's pov. What a poet writes should be read, appreciated, and given support by way of encouragement!
On another note regarding new members they should be welcomed as soon as they are discovered and given attention. It is sociable to welcome them and try to associate and share positivite vibes.
Moreover each of us can very easily nurture the other vice if given a chance...oh well guess as long as one does their part won't worry about what someone else is doing.

Blessings as always
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I saw that comment also, Felix, and I read it a little differently than you did,agreeing with part and disagreeing with other parts, but I understand how you took it also. There are many talented writers here and some that are still learning or are using this as a vehicle of personal expression and I agree, there is room for all here. Sometimes, I will admit to being annoyed by poets who have a lot of talent, but post often, even if it is not worthy of their abilities...perhaps that is what she meant. Some post several poems a day here, well thought out and some poorly written, hoping that like buckshot one might hit the target. In a way, I think this cheapens the talent of that author, but far be it from me to say what someone should and should not post. Each pays their fee and each has as much right as the other. As a case in point, I will mention Lisa Hilbers, who started out so weakly and in a matter of months became one of the most talented authors on this site...personal opinion, but I think that most will agree with me on this. Sorry Lisa for mentioning you without your permission, but you are a perfect case in point. Also, there is a I'll scratch your back, you scratch mine" attitude here, where there is no constructive criticism, only praise in hope for praise on their own words in return. I do understand her frustration, but I think she could have been a bit more diplomatic with the way she presented her views, but she, like the rest of us, has a right to say whatever she wishes here.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
a well thoughtout and much needed write-i do think constructive ctritisism is good-i know I have sometimes posted and found errors therefore fixing and re-posting--anyway, the AD folks have treated me well and I am fortunate to have only read about folks like this, they must avoid my work as well!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Fee,
A much needed write, my friend. We are all here for the same reason. We are all poets, rather we are educated or not. I did not take any writing classes, yet I feel my poetry is fair. I have read poems on AuthorDen that have made me cry and made me laugh. We have some VERY AMAZING poets on this site. I've called AD home for five years now and enjoyed it immensely. AD members: Hold you head up high and be proud. All of us have made this site outstanding!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed on April 7, 2007
It is a sad state of affairs when poets attack each other like this. Something needs to be done to stop it! We are supposed to be a FAMILY, a Family of writers who love what we do. I happen to love how you write, and many others, here. Some people seem to get all the glory while others get barely a passing glance. We all have our own styles, and we can't all think or write alike. This is what makes each one of us unique, and this is how we happen to operate. This is one reason why I don't do poetry; I'm more of a storyteller. Poetry for me is too hard, and when I write one, I get a lot of reviews, which I don't understand. I HATE how I write poetry. I write STORIES, NOT poems. Many poets pour their hearts and souls into their words and when their words are not acknowledged it hurts. BIG time. I understand the frustrations here, rant on! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Powerful piece of work, Fee!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Well written, my friend. I think you said it all quite good in all details. I don't remember there being a rule that only published works can be put here. I understood this was a place to read and meet other "authors" and not just for poems. For stories, articles, blogs, etc. If someone doesn't like an authors work I believe that's why they put that little unsubscribe place to click. Maybe they'll read your post and think before acting next time. Good show. Lady J

Reviewed on April 7, 2007
(((Fee))),

I write, because I have to, because I love to. Good, not, doesn't matter: my words. Write for you. Support others here, as you have always my words...and I have tried to do.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Felix - I commend you for writing this. There are diverse members of the Den, and we need to remember their preferences and foibles.
HOWEVER, I do suggest that each of us try our best to improve writing skills, paying attention to how the better writers do some of the better things. Because of the examples, suggestions and encouragement of others, I believe that I'm a far better writer than back in 2003, when I joined AD.

Frankly, I don't know how some of those who post here, can try to write - without getting some help on basic English. Seeing potentially good work made less by the writer not having learned the rules of simple English composition. It's not a matter of being different; It's a form of laziness and, "I don't give a shit !" I know this, because there are some of them within my extended family... but I keep riding their butts, because a few have seen the light and are proud of themselves, and their improvement. Better writing is out there... if we'll just go get it ! ! !

With understanding and gratitude for holding off unfair critics! - Bill

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Let's face it. Someone pissed in her orange juice or her panty elastic is too tight.

AD is a good place to learn. I've see some fine poets and writers develop here, when their first works were struggling ones. Through the process of writing they learned to polish their work. Writing, learning anything, is a process. It takes courage to put your first work out there as an offering, and your second and third. A good critique is one thing, but slash and burn is a no-no, and too many don't know the difference or just don't care. Their snobbery is an immature one-up-man-ship.

Good rant.
Elizabeth

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
To the one that wrote that words I would say only UNWELCOMED!!!!!!!!!
we don't want you on our mist, I wish I knew your name to pass it on to all my trackers and the trackers of my trackers until we can ostracize your sorry ass.
Hitler tried once, it did not take.
I am with you all the way.
Disgusting!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Good for you Fee
I agree a hundred percent
and to me, I see AD, as a fun place, not an obligation, or a trial before fire..........
most people are so good heartedd, I am suprised when I read of a judgmental type, because they avoid my poems lol......maybe that absense is a attempt to tell me something....like...A pax.....you sux lolol

but how would i know lololol

so glad you posted this
you are a warrior for clarity of spirit and a gentleman
plus a darn good writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
diploma or not

you soar!
pax A


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