Could Have Been (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

All the 'if's' in life don't count for what's in front of me right now...good work.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

I have thought about the 'what ifs' many times in the last three years but I do try not to dwell on it.. Your poem is so bittersweet...
Myrna

Reviewed by Rev. Dr. Deborah Simpson

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

The repetitiveness works well with this one. Great write

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Sweet bitterness, wonderful penned,
LOve, R&B

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Excellently penned, (((Fee))), this coulda/shoulda...might have beens.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

This was well penned....like the way you played with couda'woulda'mighta... :) !!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

hey I wrote this when I was playing blackjack in vegas....lol
walt

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Those what if's sure can ache...

Chrissy

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

What a memory huh
Sweet Fee!
I'm glad you have
the wonderful memories
of what if's...
This is a gem Fee!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
Stay POsitive!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

a good write here and causes reminissing of ones own could have, would have, might have beens...

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

I absolutely LOVED that last line! You are so very good at this Fee. Another keeper!

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Great write Fee. You've expressed your thoughts of, could of..and what's if's, well in this beaurifully done peom.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

What if........last famous words.
A good put question to an inecapable afterwards reality.
If we knew the answer, why we asked?
Georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Wow I like it " Could Have Been? but you made
Some very special memories that will
Stay with you for ever!!
Excellent poetic thoughts
Love and Peace to you
And hugsss!!
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

awe...woulda, coulda, shoulda...been there, done that

Reviewed by Linda Dousay

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

What a romantic! This is beautiful, Fee.

Linda

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Oh I liked this Felix~memories!
Blessings to you and take care.
Sincerely,
From the Heart...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Excellent writing as always,Enjoyed ..stay well and safe...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

You leave a lot of thought from the words: Could Have Been. These words are all part of the game of life. You did an outstanding job penning that image.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Gypsy Soul (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Hey Kat,
How go'z it Bro ? ? ?
Re Your Write:You may be right You may be wrong You may be crazy but if Ya ! wuna look . it in all it'z entirity & in tha wise word'z of My 5 year old nephew & with all due respect "Build Me a Bridge 'n' get ova it" If your play'n a game then yer ! i expect you would be piss'd . not winning.

Blessed Be ! ! !

Love'n'Light
Gypsy.xxx

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

You have me sifting through memories and dreams...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Felix you lose me with the words you write, you are a wonderful writer and you put your heart into what you do write. I love it.
Love your Cuz Rose XOXO