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Walking In My Battered Shoes
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Self explanitory...

 


Walking In My Battered Shoes


 


So you want to walk in my old shoes today


I’m tired and they give me blisters anyway


You think my life’s been such a happy stroll


Will go ahead then try to fill that role


 


I walked so many miles along life’s path


I’ve more than fifty years on these old heels


Both good and bad I took it all in stride


So step right up and tell me how it feels


 


Your youth tells you that I’m just too dam old


Life ahead for you is just one open road


You call me Pops and say now step aside


Welcome to it kid for I weary from the load


 


 


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 Reviews of "Walking In My Battered Shoes"
Reviewed on May 28, 2007
VERY Well SAid and Felt!
Sweet Fee!
YOur shoes lies with many memories!
Good Bad and the Ugly! :)
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
BE Happy!
BE Healthy!
Stay SAFE!

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 27, 2007
I understand this dear Fee!
I imagine when those later days arrive, if we're lucky we'll embrace and freely release everything far easier. Ushering the youth to kick up their heals with the love of life and purpose!
Biggest hugs to you always!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
The young one's will feel the pain so0n enough.
I didn't think I would get older while thinking I was
going to die young.
Great write, right?

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
The best wisdom that comes to me at this age is to know when to step aside and them blindly go where we have already been. Great poem today, totally enjoyed, Lady J

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Excellent write the
Message is loud and clear
Today youth would not know how to bear
The pain of walking in their fathers shoes
Life is not as easy as they think!!
Excellent poetic thoughts but a realistic message within
Love and Peace And a Safe Memorial day......Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
I have a pair of shoes just like yours. We become older and wiser as the years go on. We are all in the same boat. Another awesome write.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Little do they know where or what we ahve done or picked up over the years, I guess we could teach them a thing or two for sure. With age comes knowledge and wisdom. Wonderful writ dear Cuz.
Love your Cuz Rose XOXO

Reviewed by Anna M
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Battered shoes can accumulate a wonderful amount of personality, experience and wisdom over time. Another well-written piece and I love the imagery.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Been there, done that! Damned good write,

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Excelent offering...filled with sadness that touched my heart!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 26, 2007
I couldn't agree more with Joseph's comment, sweet Fee. And what's more... those who have walked more, have many more and much more interesting stories to tell, which makes of them infinitely more fascinating... partners to stride along the path, just sit together with and having a wonderful time, or dancing... or doing, barefeet, with a lot more "aplomb", charm and "savoir-faire", what... those mere "apprentices" think they do best... but don't, really! ;0) So, let them wish they were walking in YOUR shoes, dearest friend... they'd be the blessed ones!
Love & lots of {{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Hey Fee,

Give them away and get new ones, my friend ... you still have a long ways to go. To walk in another's shoes is to gain understanding and wisdom.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
very good, Felix~

Reviewed on May 26, 2007
You gotta love this. What they don't know is that after fifty it just gets better. Great poem Fee.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
welcome to it kid...
they ain't got a clue ...but they will find out someday
good one Felix

Walt

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Oh my,how touching your words are...Hugs

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Like the old saying goes. "Walk a mile in my moccy's" it's true, you don't know anyone elses life, you can only imagine, unless your circumstance has been similar, then you can empathize with someone else.
The young today...Do not adhere to honouring thy father and thy mother...The Simpsons is the iconic staple diet of todays young youth.. HUH what do we expect shoving that down their necks.
So to the producers who are intent on breaking down the family unit, and to those who condone it...you brought it on yourselves.

Take a load off Fee~I am sure you brought yours up the correct respectful way.
Hugszzz Ch'erie

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Sad sad write.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Fee,
Awesome, awesome write! The youth of today would not know how to bear the pain of walking in someone elses shoes. Most of them have it so much easier than we did. Another outstanding write and as Georg say's a library keeper. It's going into mine!

Many blessing,
~Linda

Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Great write cuz, so often I would like for certain people to walk in my shoes too. I certainly relate to this.
Love & hugs to you

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Love this as I can surely relate-

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
It is only when we grow older that we begin to understand the trials and tribulations that most have faced in their lives and the accumulated wisdom that has come because of them. In our youth, we each thought we had what it takes to single-handly change the world and set our own destiny. At some point, life beats that out of us or perhaps we just mellow and begin to understand that we teach only by example. We learn, through our own imperfections, not to judge others too quickly. Nice job, Felix.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Words for the wise...

Chrissy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Oh! the youth, the youth, they think not to be old one day.
And about shoes, I will burn mine, I don't wish my worst enemy to wear them. The blisters didn't came from walking, someone put them there.
This is a poem for library keepers.
Georg


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