Stagnant (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Great word usage...quite visual to.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

Glad YOU got this ONE OUT Sweet Fee!
Love the darkness and bleakness of it!
Today! is a good day! Right...
P.s. Kill those nasty mosquito eggs, more creative juices will start to flowwwwwwwwwww...
If writers block/think of something that makes you smile, and your pen will arrive!

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

My,My where do you come up with them dear cuz, different but oh so interesting, you describe it so well and it can be taken in so many ways. Hope everything is good with you, and this isn't a sign of Writers Block by the way.
Love & hugs cuz

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 28, 2007

This poem tells me of those lies that never went away but formed a infested pond.
Only the truth can pull that curtain.
georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Well Fee I can tell you that if you have writers
Block then I wish to have that too
Because this is a beautiful imagery and
A great piece of poetry!
I do hope you and yours have a safe and happy
Memorial Day!!
Love and Peace to you and many hugsss....Yolie!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Felix, I can relate. if writers block,
then wait a little bit!
Thanks for sharing

Dale

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Yipoo writers block without the block!!

You said it so well...it's almost like a spell!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

I stay away from the keyboard until the whole composition i can see
for fear of dissapointing with drivel
Walt

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Wow, there's a new image for writers block I've never seen before in words or the color to bring it into focus. Well done, Lady J

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

What incredible imagery you have used in this, Felix! This is awesome~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

I can honestly say that for me, this write is one of the reasons i enjoy AD and writing--the honesty with wich lives are shared is astounding to me as one who, without writing, has always been reserved and closed-thank you so much for sharing this

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Things will get better,believe me,stay safe and well...Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Hate when stagnant becomes a part of our life for awhile. When that happens, all you can do is look up for better days ahead.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

A very vivid portrait of the inability to flow in life's crystal stream. Hope this isn't of you - you have too much life in you!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Better days ahead.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Felix this is different for you,time and pain have dammed the stream,
I sure hope this has nothing to do with you or your day.
Love your Cuz XOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

Oh Homme Fatale....This is pretty eeeeeeeerrrr Stagnant! :P

Hope you feel better on the morrow.

Hugzzzzzzzz
Cherry