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Going, Going, Gone
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Sometimes the weight of the world seems far too heavy to bear...

I’m going where there’s no more pain

Past the aching hearts or wounded soul

Past the heaviness pressing down

Like a ship forced upon a shoal

The weight of yesterday’s moments

Lost in the blur of tomorrow’s day

Yea, I know I may be just a big wimp

At least that’s what my teardrops say

My solo grief lies dormant in my soul

Lost in a limbo of my almost broken mind!

 

 

 

 
 


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Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
'Like a ship forced upon a shoal'...

I think we all can relate to being shipwrecked once or twice :)

Good write, Fee, as always!
Hope you are well. Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Wonderful writing,I know these feelings as well...Hugsss

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
to the point, with no holds barred ...

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Wonderfully penned, Fee ... I have had my share of those feelings lately ... Just hang in there, this too shall pass ... not as quickly as we'd like, but it will ... hugs

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I'd like to go with you.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Fee I think we all have this kind of days
We just have no energy
Take care of yourself rest and things will get better!
I will pray for you!!
Powerful emotions throughout the page!!
Love Peace and Joy and many Hugssss to you...Yolie


Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Beautifully expressed, Felix. The day after a black one, huh?? Moment by moment, we manage to stumble forwards... ever onwards and upwards. Be kind to yourself and rest... eat... sleep. Our teardrops have a habit of beating us up and punching us on the nose when our defences are down, the fickle things... That's why my hooter's always red! :)) When you think about that, perhaps you'll smile! I told you they were fickle. Unlike the rest of us... Arms are good.... you have hundreds of pairs offering consoling hugs on th is page, darlin Pops. And the sun'll come out tomorrow... Annie says... Be well, Felix. Love Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Something I can relate to my friend!!

Warm Hugs Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Dear Fee,

This poem reads like a soul crying out in the darkness. Keep your eyes open and toward the horizon and I'm sure that you'll enjoy another glorious sunrise.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I can certainly relate to this... "this too shall pass" are words I live by. Hang in there.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Felix, though a sad tale, I think it's one of the best of yours that I've hadd the pleasure of reading.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Powerful emotion-filled write, Fee; I hope you are okay! You are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
"Yea, I know I may be just a big wimp"
...cries with timid tears in a milksopped soul
"Going, Going, Gone", a kept write of self console...

God Bless those with the strength to realize
He'll never gives us anymore,
then that of which, we can't handle!
Hang write~within and keep right in His direction, Fee~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Felix this will ease with each passing day as I know you realize in your heart there is a much better place awaiting us after our time here on earth is through. Love you Cuz, Take care. Love XOXOXO Rose

Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Darlin cuz this is different. I do hope it is about your dear friends passing. It sounds like someone reaching out to go HOME to his maker, anywhere to be rid of the pain and suffering. If so I can certainly understand it. Hope you are ok dear cuz. xoxoxoxo

Love & God Bless

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
But it is only sometimes that we feel this way. Then it's time to pray. Victor

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
poignant lines are written here-especially the last two--

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
To let go and let God, to finally give up trying, finally give up fighting against an unknown force. to go where there is no pain is hard to do yet if you go where pain lets you know you are still living life then you have a chance at happiness. Lady J

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
an emotional display of someone who feels at a very deep level

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
Hang in there Fee, just another lash from the whip of character. Ouch!


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