Butterfly Whispers (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 21, 2007

OMG! This is darn right BEAUTIFUL Sweet Fee!!!!
A treasured gem I will keep forever!
YOur love is so pure!
well understood~
Your words were touched with a delicate touch!
I wrote of butterflies too, but differently, I haven't put in it yet. I really love this style! Romantic interlude of kindess and deep LOVE!NEVER to be Forgotten!
WOW!
Warm Hugs and Love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
Namaste!
:)

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 20, 2007

I'm sorry I missed this Fee, but for what is worth now, it's soft, gentle and endearing.
Nothing comes out perfect when we are in grief, and it dosent matter, what matters is that it comes from the heart, as this write more than abundantly does.
Hugs to you as always
Cherry

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

It's a sweet pen that I'm sure she will treasure. Lady J

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Darlin Pops, what a gift you are and what a gift you have. Like you and the special meaning you bring to these tender and deeply penetrating words that say as much as any Master's canvas, the combination of your heart, your presence, your voice all presenting YOUR inspired feelings and thoughts will be just PERFECT. And the result WILL be powerful and evident for all to see and share in. Be at peace - this will bring it, together with hope and comfort. Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Fee,

Perfect as is. Beautifully penned eulogy.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Beautiful! God bless your friend; and God bless you too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

This is perfect..so gentle tender but awesomely powerful all at the same time!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Felix, this is spoken in a voice of sincerity and truth...I wouldn't change a thing...it's beautiful and it speaks straight from the heart. Words are those spoken by a writer who holds the pen and the thoughts are his/her's and regardless how you change it...they are not the words spoken by you.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Felix, anything that comes from the heart is perfect and this one is. It is a beautiful poem which I am sure would be appreciated. Victor

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

ITS PERFECTION........DO NOT CHANGE A LINE
straight from the heart you always write
I love this

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Felix as I mentioned to you earlier you are perfect at your words and she will appreciate your words forever more, don't change what is right.
Love ya Cuz, XOXO Rose

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Oh Sweetpea! This was so very touching and so very beautiful! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Moving and comforting. R

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

this is so beautifully written, i wouldn't change a thing

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Sweet dear cuz there is nothing that needs changing in your beautiful words I assure you, it brought the big tears from my eyes and touched my heart for as you know it won't be long from before I too will be experiencing the sorrow and pain that you are now a part off... I feel your pain already.

Love & hugs to you dear cuz
xOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

I think the last two verses could use some work. For instance, the third line 'was then she realized' - after the butterfly circled have it perhaps do something a little more magical and then go into the last line about feeling his spirit for her there. You know the guy, if you can make it a little more personal, like remembering something about nature he loved, for instance, and connecting it somehow to the butterfly.

Other than that, I think you've got a wonderfully vivid poem to read aloud. Good work!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

this is pure and beautiful, Felix~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Fee,
What a wonderful sentimental, inspirational tribute to a man with an amazing spirit..Please tell her from Amber "V" that "all the love in the world cannot amount to an ounce of what he felt for her"...I have channeled this message from his spirit, he really loved her with all his being..

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Fee,
Don't change a thing, my friend. This poem has depth and compassion in every line. Please read it at the memorial. It will mean alot to your friends wife, and be sure to give her a copy.

Blessing and Hugggs,
~Linda

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on July 19, 2007

Beautiful as written. Don't change a thing. There is texture to this poem and it should have a settling effect when you perform it.

George