Time Runs Out (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

Oh the fickle society we live in today....And the lawyers get the fat bank accounts, country club memberships, fancy cars....
while the heartbreak goes on, and on, an on...
Hope as others have stated, this is just an acute observation of life....one with which I can truly relate indeed.
Warm Hugs to you
Cherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

This is sad Felix!!

Hope this is only poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

Well, that's the way it goes, Dear Fee. In the end, it's always the lawyers that win.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

(((Fee)))

Your mood matches mine, today...this one hurts. Hope it's fictional, but the pain I feel within me tells me its not.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

Fee,
Listen to the wind telling you that everything will be all right. You have done the best you can, and also, your spirit is now set free. Fly with the wind and be the best man you know you are, within!"

To my sweet Fee,
much peace, love, and light to you,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

Sad story, well told.

Dan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

Fee,
did you write this? Or did me?

Walt

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 30, 2007

YIkees, rain pours down HARD Here!
Tears I fear to fester, but growth only steps away!
this hurts, I 've been here too!
My heart is with you Sweetie!
YOu wrote this pain out with a such a flow of reality!
WArm hugs and tender love, Warrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay safe!
YOu are in my prayers and throuout all day!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

I have lived this and you have it totally right.

True true write!
Ann

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

so very sad-the feel of defeat is strong-you have written it well

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

I have had friends who ended up like this and it is always sad, because a kind word, a smile, a compliment, all go a long way. Great poem though. Victor

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

I think this is about one of the best divorce pens i read. I liked this a lot. Fitting title. Lady J

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

OMG this touches my heart it is so sad but so expertly penned sweet cuz.

Love you darlin
Selena

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

An amazing expression of lost love. A poignant baring of soul.

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

Wow. Nicely penned, but- really sorry, Fee.

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

A poignant tale of love gone bad....the lawyers are the ones who win. Touching poetry. Lydi**

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

Very very sad your words expressed
a relationship that is going their separate ways
breaking your heart I prayed this is only poetic thoughts
Fee.. but yes that is very realistic truth
And it happens to often!
Outstanding tone and deeply felt emotions!!
Many hugsss Love Peace and Joy to you always....Yolie

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

As always you've done an excellent job!!!!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

Felix this one breaks my heart, it is so sad, and I pray that it is just words that has come to you which you felt had to be put on paper. Love ya Cuz, XOXOXO Rose

Reviewed by Jennave Coz

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

Seems this story is too often and too real...Beautiful font for a sad end...Jen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

My heart aches and if there ever was a heart with a face then mine own would be one of complete despair. Fee, is this real or is this a voice of a heart you've witnessed. I will say that or os pne sadly broken in two.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

:(

You told the tale well.

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on July 29, 2007

Heartbreak in the lines, heartbreak between the lines. Well done my friend.
Hugs!!!

By Felix L. Perry

Our love just lost the test of time