Message In A Bottle (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 4, 2008

Not answering email - you think she's gonna answer a message in a bottle thats been sent out to sea? LOL Sadness fills this poem, but I can feel the hope and longing.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 1, 2008

So sad. So well written. My heart broke while reading this poem. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2008

Lovely, Lovely, Lovely...think I'll go down to the river and see if
an old flame sent me a bottle, My favorite song from Jim..."time in a Bottle"...Loved the thoughts you have written and the flow of the
words...(or bottle...hehe) take care dear man...Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 1, 2008

There's something so myserious yet romantic about a bottled message. You brought those feelings to life with this write!
Sheila

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

An excellent write. Enjoyed the read very much.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Another very fine offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

One gorgeous photograph, always drawn back to the ocean. Loving thoughts of what was and hope of what could still be.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Love is sad and sometimes fleeting, I suppose.
Don't know why though, but maybe, just maybe

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Good write and feelings expressed well. Lady J

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Fee,
I've been in this same situation, questioning these very emotions before, myself. In fact, I'm there, now. But, please take comfort in knowing that others do care, regardless of how lonely life may seem.

Beautiful and emotive writing.

Thanks,
Jill

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

A true write. I have had some friends from the past just disappear into thin air. If this happens to anyone keep sending those bottles. Enjoyed reading.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Poignant words, and the message in a bottle has always been a special thought to me, although never have sent one, and never have found one.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

I truly hope they find that message, and respond.

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

What sweet, tender and poignant thoughts. However, I find it hard to believe that anyone would drift away from you dear Fee. Nice write.

Sanja xo

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Felix I really like this one but I know you very well and this could never happen in your real life because everyone loves you. Great write Cuz. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXO Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Fee, you are the lyrics of a tango...and that's a compliment!!!
And as they say in China, "je ne regret rian"

Georg

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

Dearest Fee......
Biggest love to you ... I couldn't imagine anyone simply disappearing out of your life... but, maybe they weren't strong enough to say goodbye... or, may not have really wanted to..
Whatever happened... writing about these things, poets love and need to do, they say..
Love and Admiration, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

I send one once, I'm wondering what happened to it.
Very sweet poetry, Fee. No doubt you are a romantic by heart!But it's sad though. I wonder; shouldn't a friendship survive silence?
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

lovely idea--love the message in a bottle idea-very romantic and sweet

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

I picture a special one at sea,,, reading a wonderful message in a bottle from a special friend... sweet poem!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

I'll be your friend, Fee. I'll be more than happy to. Powerful write of yearning and sadness! Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers), your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

(((Fee)))

I'm right here, Sweetie - how could someone not be your friend? Painful yearning in this one - well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

Feelix I don't think there's a soul out there, male or female, who wouldn't want to be your friend forever. I know I do!
Love this tender poem.
Blessings and love,Susan