Hairline Cracks (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 23, 2010

"Hairline Fractures" unattended propagate into massive, destructive fault lines that create irreparable damage. Best to address each little one quickly and see them mended before it's too late for love to recover. This poem has such a natural flow and meter Felix. Happy Thanksgiving my dear friend. I did you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

Aah...so true, and something we learn with time in a relationship. There are invisible lines we must constantly avoid. Great poem, Fee. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

This is beautiful Felix and a hairline crack is never too late to repair. All one has to do is use a piece of one's heart to mend it forever.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 21, 2010

this is beautiful in your delivery Fee
and a very vital message to remind us of
the importance to be good to those we love

Love & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Those "hairline cracks" do more damage than we realize, especially over time. And if we're not careful, they can become virtually impossible to repair...the heart, like the mind, has a memory!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Fee, I was just having this discussion this morning with the Director of my new play.
We were talking about something that was on the BBC network, about how the Heart has memories. Has it's own feelings aside from the mind. As I have always written, I believe this from the bottom of my heart...It also stated on that program, that when someone gets a heart transplant, Your poem brings that fact to heart. no pun intended..

As always your poetry touches me.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Even the smallest of hairline cracks need tending to, seems in life so many are overlooked, causing complete breakage...your poem speaks of wisdom from a heart that knows~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

so true-we should be more careful with our love!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Powerful poem ~ This is a most compelling observation.
These hairline cracks can do more damage than we know until it's too late.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Truth....penned to perfection! Loved this, Fee!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Nicely done Fee. Hairline cracks become major craters if left unattended. Too many teardrops eventually become a torrential downpour. Constant attention to the little things is a fulltime requirement and even that often isn�t enough. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

Fee: Love is the glue. Great poem!

Deborah

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

ohhh...sad Fee, ignore the cracks...though it hurts....but, what to do, this is quite true too... Forget,forget.. Stay well, keep well... best wishes..neerja

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

love your heartbreaking, but true words. hope you are well.
Kathy