slipping away (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 22, 2011

An apparition whose story we do not know. Why does she silently stroll the walks of the living? Your ku ask questions for which answers are longing. I bid you love and peace my dear friends. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Schilken

Reviewed on January 19, 2011

You've got a heart for feeling. Keep in touch.

rege

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

You know an artist is good when he/she makes you feel. A somber, but dramatic effect in your words, Fee. Different from you. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

the essenc of this is so true to life
How are any of us to know
unless we reveal our souls...

Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2011

Fee, Her stance gave herself away...
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 6, 2011

My dearest Santa Fee, the picture is haunting and the ku is just perfect for it...so much meaning in so few words...loved it! Love and blessings to you.

Hugs,
Sheri

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 6, 2011

Truly inspiring picture, and your Ku is magic!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 5, 2011

I know I was part of her spirit! Sweet Fee!
I LOVE how a picture evokes feelings that must be written, I'm glad you did let it be forgotten! Sorry! I've been gone soooo long, I'm kinda' back...I'm tryin'

WRITE ON!
Love and WARM Hugs, Passionate_Shee
and your Front Page, I love your Santa pict. PERFECT! with the wee little one whispering in your ear, a secret for/to Santa! Her Friend!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 5, 2011

I read this one yesterday and I got called away, sorry Cuz. Another of your best in my eyes, as I always take those to heart.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 5, 2011

Pictures truly can inspire poetry.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 5, 2011

beautiful!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 5, 2011

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

She is probably like me, having a hard time finding a job, so she is crying...I am not far from it either...e

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Your warm heart does capture the moment well....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

This is a melancholy beauty, Felix.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

this is a ku to chew on... ku ku ka-choo... that makes you the eggman, Felix... cause you hatched 'er. Likin' it. You set a wonderful mood... are you going into your Blue Phase?

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Sad haiku, perfectly executed! Well done, Fee; love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Fee, perfect 'Ku, love the painting too.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Fee, I saw it completely differently.....

She's not walking away, she's looking just for you. She's peering into the mist and listening for a clue. She's been watching for weeks, waiting for you to appear. She swears on all that�s dear to her, she'll always want you near.

Course, I could be wrong..... Dick

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

I love this. . .both the 'ku and the way you could see her tears. Nice, Fe.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Her tears speak volumes,
it is true love that can hear,
catch a falling heart

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on January 4, 2011

Wow! That picture does say alot with her legs and feet slipping away. The sadness is so deep that she vanishes into thin air. Love, Chessly