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Comfortable Asylum
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Three ku's but having problem with format...

Comfortable Asylum

Crystalline love rays

Shining in your twinkling eyes

Sugar coat my heart…

Music of your voice

A symphony to my ear

Lulls to elation…

Knowing that your heart

Beats in unison with mine

Makes my world revolve…

 


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 Reviews of "Comfortable Asylum"
Reviewed on June 17, 2012
Such a lovely place to be!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on May 16, 2012
If love be an asylum, Have me commited right away.
Nicely phrased Fee.

~W~

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 12, 2012
I'm not to sharp when it comes to ku's, but I know when kudos’ are called for and the time is now.

Nicely done. Dick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
I ordinarily do not very much like haiku. However in this case, the couplets blend together in a meaningful way, creating a message of some substance.

Ron

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
Wonderful Cuz, they fit together very well.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
Very nice, my friend.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
Fee, Your Ku's seem to all fit together---N*i*c*e

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
Enchantingly romantic, Fee!!! Love doesn't get any better than this!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
Fee, These melt together like honey, smooth and sweet...just beautiful~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
I see no problem with the format, though I know not of ku's too well, and I find this quite pretty...e

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
Crystalline Ku's Felix. Lovely symphony of heart.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
Words spoken so tenderly and dear what a beautifully written poem indeed Laura


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