The sea of life
cannot amend
the feelings
that we offer.
Our lives
leave us nothing to redeem.
Still, the waves we make
hold true to our emotion.
They crash the shore
forever more
in testament
to our complaint.
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Reviewed by Cody Piggott (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Wow i like it. A small poem with a big meaning, Great Metaphor, Nicely done.
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excellent metaphor ...
Very well said!
Lisa