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The waves we make
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The sea of life
cannot amend
the feelings
that we offer.
Our lives
leave us nothing to redeem.
Still, the waves we make
hold true to our emotion.
They crash the shore
forever more
in testament
to our complaint.

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 Reviews of "The waves we make"
Reviewed by Cody Piggott (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Wow i like it. A small poem with a big meaning, Great Metaphor, Nicely done.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 11, 2005
truth speaks here
loved the metaphor
enjoyed

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 8, 2005
waves have no control over their actions ...

excellent metaphor ...

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 8, 2005
every emotion creates its own wave and affects the shore of others as well as our own

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 8, 2005
We truly do make our own waves.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 8, 2005
Yes Pierre they do..and the waves continue over and over again, and we have nobody to blame but us.
Very well said!

Lisa


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