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One loving grace
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A single letter is all that can separate
everything we do into right and wrong
and that letter is I

Just one loving grace
denied in the intolerance
of our selfishness,
or afforded in the sincerity
of our smiles,
is all that decides
how painful or beautiful
we can sing our song,
if we will live in peace or madness
or become the victims of our own fear.
Just one lonely space
hidden in our longing,
where we cry within our loss,
is all that divides
our hearts from where they are
in sadness
and where they belong in joy.
That empty place
however hard sought
by each other's hope,
is still harbored
along the shores of our indifference
and lost upon the sea of our tears.

Copyright 2005 Pierre Ortega   

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 Reviews of "One loving grace"
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 20, 2006
"...along the shores of our indifference ..." A powerful line Dear Pierre, yet they all are! A beautiful title for a necessary poem, set up perfectly with the statement:
"A single letter is all that can separate
everything we do into right and wrong
and that letter is I"
Thank you for sharing your heart!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 20, 2006
amen to this, brother. this is the space in between choices indeed. the application of mental and spiritual power to the real world, to the mundane everyday world of our senses is where true ascention lies, isn't it...great work, extraordinary insight.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
this is so wise and beautiful.....very true

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
"That empty place is...harbored along the shores of our indifference and lost upon the sea of our tears." Profoundly beautiful, Pierre! That empty place, the middle path, the flutter of transcendence, that loving grace, pure joy is held back by the indulgent ego("I") and resulting emotions. This I saved!

Lin

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
"A single letter is all that can separate
everything we do into right and wrong
and that letter is I" .....this is a profound statement and allows the self to dig deep...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Bittersweet, but very beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!

Eileen


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