Wandering Thoughts (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 15, 2008

A gentle breeze of reality, reminisce and loosened regrets flows from a past to present time, as the author recollects...

Beautifully penned~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

the emotional foundation or layer of this poem gradually builds into revealing your true sentiments, to the point of its conclusion in a quite eloquent manner ...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

This is an excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,beautifully done and written,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Time can sit one down and bring forth those memories that become written thoughts...your poem expresses so much more than the emotion of age and reflection...there is a realistic grasp that one can feel as they read through your wandering thoughts...

nice work Carole...

enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Poignant and beautifully written,Carole! the images
stir emotions so that we feel your pathos

Hugs,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

The cloak of time seems to sit squarely upon the soft shoulders of this gentle, yet hauntingly nostalgic write, Carole. The final strophe seems to qualify all of the build-up and shapes our perspective as to the inherent isolation contained within. It seems that a life of choice is balanced now against a life where choice has been forced upon it. As always, your work sings positively in a minor key. Kate xx

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Wonderful to read where your thoughts wander, fluttering in these lines back and forth between the past and the present. Can't deny the sense of despair but also love the quiet grace and wisdom that put despair in its proper place. Much gratitude for the brilliantly shared thoughts,

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

My goodness this is as beauiful as rings sadness...stunning work Carole,,,
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

A very sad piece, Carole. May your next wandering thoughts be happy ones.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Great reflective write, Carole; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

The time to actually ponder and look back at choices and our lifes means in a way we did make the right choices for it testifies that we have survived and are able now to remember the good and the bad.

fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Happy to see you posting Carole
And an outstanding piece too
Love & peace be with you

Willam

Reviewed by Stephen Pollard

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Dear Carole :

Very well done.

Sincerely,

Stephen Pollard

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Carole, you led me gently by the hand through your thoughts -- simply a wonderful piece of work you have shared -- and, as others have noted, the last line, is magnificent -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

I really liked this, Carole . . . You took the reader into your confidence and allowed us to touch a part of you that maybe we had not seen . . . The poem, or wandering thoughts, would not have been complete without the last line . . . As the kids say . . . Awesome.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "Wandering Thoughts".

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Deep thoughts to contemplate, yet brought to the surface of the mind in such a flowing, delicate manner....

Be always safe,
Karen