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The General Store
by Carole Mathys → (All Poetry by Carole Mathys)
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A Collaborative Effort from the pens of
Carole Mathys and Jon Michael Willey

“The General Store”

 

Swift current ripples the surface

of tannic black waters

the Seminole's call the Ocklawaha River

a brew of swamp and wetland decay

snowy egrets strut the banks

with a wary eye always

on sunning gators movement

coots, black as tar, paddle and maneuver

as bass break the surface

gulping oxygen and flies

Spanish moss drizzles in lacy patterns

from live oaks swaying in humid air

large, fat mosquitoes hover and drone

in the pressing heat

as wigglers slither, ruling the palmettos

at the Hog Valley Store

the locals swagger in

leaving the sugar sand parking lot

in disarray crowded with

pick up trucks and , dirt bikes

outsiders ain’t welcome

in the good ole boys hangout

where greasy burgers and long necks

feel at home

the pool table smells like cheap booze

and occasional wacky weed

what the good ole boys call easy livin

is outside the local law

seedy ventures where Smith & Wesson

and shady clientele venture into

poaching and  distilling deep in the forest

swamp buggies and air boats roar

providing transportation for most

upon the store walls, trophies

the skin of “Old Joe”, six plus feet

of rattler  stretched out

fat as a small pig

belly up boys and spin a yarn or two

while you down a brew

at the hog valley general store

life takes on its own view

 


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 Reviews of "The General Store"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on March 9, 2009
Thank you Carol and Jon for this well written piece.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 4, 2009
an excellent piece you two
Yes I possess that exact beautiful scenic view
From my back yard, haven't scene any gotor there yet
but we do have them in our man made lakes and ponds
most are small so they may be managed
the view is priceless
all the beautiful large birds gather around
just before an oncoming stome,
what we are missing is a General store
We do have "Publix" and wynn Dixie oh yes
we just got a wal-mart..... I guess we have to keep up with modern times......
Peace be with you both

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 4, 2009
Some of my Confederate bones were rattling with happiness when reading this poem collaboration, even I smell magnolias coming from it.
Who could imagine that a Praying Mathys and a Wild Jan could combine?
Good work people!

Georg


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Carole,
I've written the review in 'Jon's space' but I would like to say to you that for me this collaboration works very well, seamlessly, a wonderful treat for this reader. Bless you both!
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
This is wonderful..great visuals...makes me think of the everglades;
keep up the duo...great blend!
Christine

Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Superb, Jon and Carole; bravo! Brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Bravo, Jon and Carole! Bravo! Thanks for this interesting and descriptive poem! I would love to read a short story by you two, which takes place within simuliar settings of The General Store!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Oh how sweet this story is and yet I am sure it could be true in many places still. A reminder of how sweet life could be if we would just slow down a little....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on March 3, 2009
The Old South comes to vivid life in these beautiful lines, Carole and Jon. A very nice place to be - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Sounds like my kind of place, give me an old barrel to sit on and pass me my guitar and I'll pick the opening notes of Deliverence while sucking down one of them long neck brews to chase the white lighting of the swamps. Love it guys...great job.

Fee


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