Dawn broke on Aaron
and his fall began
In truth, Asheric would hang
so, too, the fortunate crows harangue
Riders from the eastern land
He left his good looks
and childhood pursuits
The call of sword and siren
rushed him to the ranks of Lord Chiron
Defense of Arador and her mutes
Pleon made arcs of fire
and souls were loosed in lots
A demon's kin joined the fray
for now, chaos and kind held sway
Mendacity smote light in blots
From Daric the wide
to the fell pines of Rondhite
Soil blood red from cur and cad
death-made brothers in cruel hexad
Licked by Tandria to winter's spite
The west and her legion
would win the field that day
Run down Chiron, bloodied king
take of his line and the sun ring
Life from eyes now stone gray
Aaron slept in tangled swoon
the life not yet departed
O'erlooked by Madrigal and mace
cursed for futility and disgrace
His prince's ambitions thwarted
In the end, t'was fair Pleon
that fiery spike of truth
Still vibrant and vital
and the only sage counsel
Will enough to save youth
Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2006
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Reviewed by Ryan Figura (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
this poem made me cry.
just because it was about a boy named aaron.
you know the story.
i know you do.
Brian, you use internal rhyme so well and your meter is always a joy! The stage is set, and your drama in progress whets the appetite for part 2! Superb!
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just because it was about a boy named aaron.
you know the story.
i know you do.
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