Eternity (poem) by Muhammad A. Al Mahdi on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Elemental and mystical at once, nearly lyrical prose. A great write. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Awe~~~some
can feel the peace and tranquilty
nature does have a way to humble us
enjoyed!!

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Mahdi, ETERNITY weaves beauty and wisdom together to form a melodious, magical work of art.

~ Mari

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

What can I say that has not yet been said? You've penned a higher spirit's movement well here through time with grace and lovely measure. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

a marvelously sagacious poem that invites the reader's spirit to soar along with you ...

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

A most beautiful and spiritually moving poem crafted by an artist.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Mahdi,

This shines with an inner Light that beckons the reader to come...come...and linger. :) Most beautifully penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

An ethereal beauty Mahdi, it caresses the soul
and soothes the heart! lovely work...Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Spiritually compelling and captivating, Mahdi. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

A powerful yet gentle surge of spiritual grace and wisdom, like a giant star hidden inside the tiny flickerings of a candle:-)

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

You are so very wise, I see that in your soul lies a deep understanding of the necessity that nature plays in the human condition. If you are not in tune with all that surrounds you your soul will never be at peace. You understand this. Blessings to you my friend. ~Z~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

beautiful, heartfelt write, muhammad; thank you for sharing! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

A beautiful, spiritual writing, Muhammad, combining soul with sea, sky, rain, humility and dreams, and creating a lasting, eternal haven for the author's well-being.

These lines spoke to me, of reverence and respect, of life and desires, and death of human flesh. It also speaks of birth, the author's birth, which was duly and faithfully recorded by celestial awareness, and compassion.

"Sea bird's wing glistens stark
Heaven's dance in the tides
Sky's heart that bears
My blood's mark"

It is a soothingly turbulent piece, an integration of self with soul.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen