A profound declaration of legacy and identity in the face of brutal chaos. What I find most moving about this portrait is the sense that the narrator has endured such horror before and shall endure this as well even while proffering some measure of compassion toward the harbingers of the chaos. These lines ache with the beauty of their nobility.
As a paean to conceptual faith of self and Other, this piece is vibrant and shows the nomad's road of discovery to enwrapped, or entrapped, completion.
I am somehow disturbed by the last two lines, though, Mahdi, perhaps because the author uses a named unknown unabsolute in questioning the essence of me...
A Me formed and crafted by life's road, mind's searching lows and highs and a willingness to try to see beyond the stale starkness of unbending organized religion into a New Age of flexibility, tolerance and cooperative actions to overcome the conditioning of history's somewhat suspect voice. Which is what you eloquently weave into the theme of the nomadic messenger, protection of self and soul against the abuse of misinformed and misled static empires.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
I am somehow disturbed by the last two lines, though, Mahdi, perhaps because the author uses a named unknown unabsolute in questioning the essence of me...
A Me formed and crafted by life's road, mind's searching lows and highs and a willingness to try to see beyond the stale starkness of unbending organized religion into a New Age of flexibility, tolerance and cooperative actions to overcome the conditioning of history's somewhat suspect voice. Which is what you eloquently weave into the theme of the nomadic messenger, protection of self and soul against the abuse of misinformed and misled static empires.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen